A Little Less Hurt

May 17, 2010 20:18

Title: A Little Less Hurt
Author: wastedcarnival
Genre: Fluff but a little sad, though. Angst
Pairing: Shou x Hiroto
Rating: G
Disclaimer: I don't own them. Only the poorly imagined story~
Summary: One sad day, all became a little less painful with one little kiss. Okay, I suck at summaries.
Comments: I suddenly had the urge to write because I missed uebo14  , yellow_shuffle  , starless_sky20  , paranoiascreamsRead more... )

works: fan fictions, band: alice nine., pairing: shou/hiroto

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silveryxdark May 17 2010, 14:09:52 UTC
Ooh, I thought that was good :D
Poor Shou, but I think it was nice how he could let Hiroto go instead of being jealous or something. It was so sweet and sad at the end but I liked it a lot ^^

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wastedcarnival May 17 2010, 14:47:07 UTC
Thank you so much~ ^^
I had my sister beta it for me. :D
She's your friend, right? ^^

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silveryxdark May 18 2010, 07:02:58 UTC
XDD Yessu :3
I sayeth hi to you and your sister :DDDDD

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wastedcarnival May 21 2010, 09:33:00 UTC
nyaha~~ ^^ i heard you were a great writer.

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piyokolove May 18 2010, 17:45:10 UTC
This was amazing, and I loved it because I could really feel the emotion being portrayed by both characters.

The end really put why Shou ended their relationship into perspective. A romance between a student and a teacher never ends well, and Shou saw that and decided to end it while they were still somewhat happy. <-- no clue why I just said that .__.

anywayyss~! it was beautiful and please don't feel bad about your writing. Though I do hope to see more from you :D I'm sure your confidence will show itself again <3

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wastedcarnival May 21 2010, 09:38:53 UTC
*cries* THANK YOU SO MUCH *glomps*
omo i really missed these kinds of comments~ they really make me happy. ♥
haha when i first posted this, this was actually unbeta'd and i forgot to include the teacher part, so i'm really thankful for my sister for fixing this.

anyway, thanks again!!!
thanks for your time on reading this~♥♥♥
iloveyoualready. ♥

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roku_kitty June 7 2010, 06:24:46 UTC
D8

uwaaah~!
It's sweet, and I liked the story, but poor Shou! I'm tempted to want them to end up together, anyway. ;3;

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wastedcarnival June 7 2010, 07:48:00 UTC
DDD:
than you so much bb! ♥
I feel sad for Shou, too. T^T

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