come home (someone's been missing you) (part 2.)

[washboarddino]

Comments

[bittersnow]

I loved how you brought the reader along with Sungmin as everything came together. ngl, a chill went down my spine as I was reading along and the ending was just heartbreaking in so many ways. I really enjoyed this. Thank you for the great read! ♥

[washboarddino]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it, hahaha, and I'm sorry for the chill, but I'm also (a bit!) glad you got that feeling. The end was sadly needed, though. Thank you so much for the sweet comment! ♥

[nautisch]

you know how I feel about this :) jsyk I love the "accident" you put in. you should write future minyoung

[washboarddino]

I do, hurhurhur. TY, btw! I never realised how well it worked out until I began writing the incident, and everything just slotted into place.
Only if you write jongluna. AND taeluna. See my bias, hurhurhur.

[fivethreerin]

this concept was really really good, and your writing pulled it off so well. it's like being right there with sungmin, and believing with him until you realise it's not true. it's amazing. <3

[washboarddino]

I was really nervous I wouldn't be able to pull this concept off, but it's such a relief to hear that. Thank you so much! You are so sweet :') ♥

[washboarddino]

Thank you so much! ^__^ ♥

[catskilt]

Wow, this was completely haunting. You're just following Sungmin through his history and life and believing every bit of it until suddenly it turns out that everything was just an alternate reality, and none of that actually happened; that's quite a stunning revelation. You wrote this really, really well, revealing the story a little by little, planting all these sudden doubts into the reader's mind about what's going on? what is the reality? and finally showing us how it had been a world constructed in Sungmin's mind, Hyukjae, Donghae, and all the other characters he encountered and pulled into his dream world. In a sense, it's heartbreaking too, because they seem so real that at the end it feels as though they really have been killed even though they didn't exist in the first place. I don't think I've read something like this before, it's original and interesting and mad props to you for pulling it off so well :D

[washboarddino]

Oh wow, that's so nice of you to say that! I tried dropping little hints throughout, but I wasn't sure how well they'd come through, or if the truth would be a complete surprise, which was definitely unwanted.
Ah, I'm so glad you found Hyukjae and Donghae so real and felt sad when they, um, died. :( I really can't express enough joy at your comment. You're so sweet, and thank you so much! ♥
(tbh, I'm STILL not sure if I pulled it off well enough to my liking considering how nervous I was doing this ;___; )

[mayawelstead]

I have to agree with catskilt. :D I don't know if I mentioned in my other comment that I thought you hinted at it really well, and I started questioning which was real through the middle.