A Brief Watchmen Fic

[washa_way]

“Rorschach! Stay with me!”

“Hurm?”

“Stay awake, man. I think you might be concussed, and I need you to-Rorschach!”

“Awake. I’m awake, Daniel.”

“Well that’s a goddam miracle in itself.”

“I was climbing.”

“I know, I know. Christ, I can’t believe I let you try that. Seven

Comments

[spuffyduds]

On reread, "a suit made of bacon" STILL cracks me up. :-)

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[ion_bond]

Oh, heart. I love the tension that doesn't resolve and especially the Dawn at the end.

It's interesting that Rorschach's so apologetic -- it's not a choice that I would have made, but it works well.

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[washa_way]

Thanks kindly, ion_bond. I was trying hard to create a believable pre-kidnapping-case Rorschach, so I knew he had to be somewhat less alienated, but it was a tough line to draw.