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catskilt June 13 2010, 04:30:22 UTC
I almost never spot but ASD;LKJ IT'S HYUKCHUL AND IT'S DIANA AND SO I AM SPOTTING.

Spot.

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warmboys June 13 2010, 04:32:43 UTC
/)__(\ why are you doing this

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catskilt June 13 2010, 08:44:42 UTC
...how do you manage to do this every single time. To make a fic so good that I don't even know where to begin saying how much I adore it. And of course this going to be extra mushy because it's HyukChul and you know my feelings with regards to that *___*

;asldkj everything about your Heechul and Hyukjae is so, so amazing. Heechul and his little girl stabbing his back in the shower. All those morbid and paranoid delusions, they're both funny and sad at the same time and the way you made Heechul talk about them was just exactly how Heechul would talk about them; with that crazy touch of humour when you know he's really feeling like shit ( ... )

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warmboys June 13 2010, 14:35:37 UTC
i keep staring at this and trying to think up something to say in response but nothing comes to mind that won't sound pathetic. sometimes i start writing something, and i have this hovering fear that it's all very, too much in my own head, the way heechul comes across to me, same for hyuk, and all the convoluted meta and trying to make sense of what we're shown on tv and what might be in real life. i worry about that a lot, because unlike most other writers, i have trouble with stating things as they are, so it means so much to read a comment like this and know, someone else gets it. it means so, so much, gem. this way i know i'm not crazy. ♥

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katsudono June 13 2010, 05:12:30 UTC
( ;_________________; )

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katsudono June 13 2010, 13:19:39 UTC
okay i'm going to give you a proper comment.

the thing i've noticed about your writing is that it's always bittersweet. even with your angst, there's always this tiny spark of hope or joy in it that makes it such a nicely rounded piece. even in this, even if it's hope at reconstructing themselves, picking up the pieces and gluing themselves back together, the lines like;

The great bands stay together not out of love but out of courtesy. Well, there’s some love mixed in there. After so many years of living, sweating, breathing together, it’s kind of hard to not confuse a common mission for that elusive trick of a human emotion. “We love Super Junior,” you say, and it’s the abstract you’re talking about, the thing you want to be and maybe even believe you are. You’re talking about millions of girls who cry for you, shared car accidents, and dancing until your legs evaporate. Everything conspires to make you feel like you are a whole, in the plural sense ( ... )

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warmboys June 13 2010, 14:51:30 UTC
♥ someday i want to write good hyukmin for you :(

never leave meee

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katsudono June 13 2010, 15:05:47 UTC
/Ttly not here. i need you here in bed with me bb to sleep.

1. i am holding you to that promise of writing me good hyukmin. so if i say its shit you'll keep writing it for me?

2. i just realised- mr. tofu. that better be my tofu.

3. i would never leave you bb ;)

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trivialaffair June 13 2010, 05:59:54 UTC
okay so i'm exhausted and probably am somewhat incoherent, but i am so in love with the way you wrote their dynamic *___________* the snark and awkwardness you portrayed between the two is just awesome :DDDD

more tired incoherence: aldskfmaldkmfaldkfmalsdkfmaldskfmalsdkf!

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warmboys June 13 2010, 14:53:37 UTC
LOL i can imagine the keysmash dribbling out of you :D get some sleep! and thanks for the read ♥

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i'd be lying if i said your icon didn't scare me. warmboys June 13 2010, 14:55:17 UTC
i so agree about their friendship! ♥ thanks for reading :)

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thundersquall June 13 2010, 15:38:31 UTC
Oh my god that entire second part had me literally incoherent. Like I was stuck on it for ages, reading and reading and reading it over and over. I just love it, love your nuances and turns of phrase, love how you bury so much emotion and subtle meaning behind each sentence so I have to flip over the words to see more. It's amazing. I think I'm never going to stop fangirling your writing. ♥ *____*

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pregnantcigar June 19 2010, 23:44:12 UTC
thanks babe ♥

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