the thing i've noticed about your writing is that it's always bittersweet. even with your angst, there's always this tiny spark of hope or joy in it that makes it such a nicely rounded piece. even in this, even if it's hope at reconstructing themselves, picking up the pieces and gluing themselves back together, the lines like;
The great bands stay together not out of love but out of courtesy. Well, there’s some love mixed in there. After so many years of living, sweating, breathing together, it’s kind of hard to not confuse a common mission for that elusive trick of a human emotion. “We love Super Junior,” you say, and it’s the abstract you’re talking about, the thing you want to be and maybe even believe you are. You’re talking about millions of girls who cry for you, shared car accidents, and dancing until your legs evaporate. Everything conspires to make you feel like you are a whole, in the plural sense.
And then someone leaves, and that balance is thrown off. How long does it take for ants to rebuild a colony?
it's so sad. it's like you're saying: yeah, there is love and happiness in the world but remember that not everything is like that, that sometimes it's a lie and you can't believe everything. that your emotions might just be a lie and a trick.
god, that hurts diana. :(
erm. i got off track. anyway, even with that tone, your fic is still so beautiful and hopeful. i love the bit of hyukhae there with:
Donghae just touches his knee and smiles. Leers.
“My innocence!” Hyukjae squeaks in perfect falsetto.
oh god i love that. and the little hyukmin. :D! but i loooove this. your dialogue is always awesome and perfect, and just the way you shape words and your little descriptions are just so peeeerfect. :3
the thing i've noticed about your writing is that it's always bittersweet. even with your angst, there's always this tiny spark of hope or joy in it that makes it such a nicely rounded piece. even in this, even if it's hope at reconstructing themselves, picking up the pieces and gluing themselves back together, the lines like;
The great bands stay together not out of love but out of courtesy. Well, there’s some love mixed in there. After so many years of living, sweating, breathing together, it’s kind of hard to not confuse a common mission for that elusive trick of a human emotion. “We love Super Junior,” you say, and it’s the abstract you’re talking about, the thing you want to be and maybe even believe you are. You’re talking about millions of girls who cry for you, shared car accidents, and dancing until your legs evaporate. Everything conspires to make you feel like you are a whole, in the plural sense.
And then someone leaves, and that balance is thrown off. How long does it take for ants to rebuild a colony?
it's so sad. it's like you're saying: yeah, there is love and happiness in the world but remember that not everything is like that, that sometimes it's a lie and you can't believe everything. that your emotions might just be a lie and a trick.
god, that hurts diana. :(
erm. i got off track. anyway, even with that tone, your fic is still so beautiful and hopeful. i love the bit of hyukhae there with:
Donghae just touches his knee and smiles. Leers.
“My innocence!” Hyukjae squeaks in perfect falsetto.
oh god i love that. and the little hyukmin. :D! but i loooove this. your dialogue is always awesome and perfect, and just the way you shape words and your little descriptions are just so peeeerfect. :3
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never leave meee
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1. i am holding you to that promise of writing me good hyukmin. so if i say its shit you'll keep writing it for me?
2. i just realised- mr. tofu. that better be my tofu.
3. i would never leave you bb ;)
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♥ :D
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