Comments | waltzmatildah: [tvd] fic | The Spaces In Between (Stefan + Bonnie)

waltzmatildah

[tvd] fic | The Spaces In Between (Stefan + Bonnie)

Feb 21, 2012 20:39

Title: The Spaces In Between
Fandom: The Vampire Diaries
Characters: Stefan (+ Bonnie)
Word Count: 100
Prompt: #2, cruel, from the angst table at drabble123
Rating: PG-13

( He writers a letter... )

character: tvd: stefan, character: tvd: bonnie, fic: drabble, television: the vampire diaries

Comments 12

swirlsofblue February 21 2012, 12:43:36 UTC

So beautiful, and says so much in so few words

waltzmatildah February 23 2012, 07:05:53 UTC

Thank you so much :)

kwritten February 21 2012, 15:19:10 UTC

You!!! You and your WORDS!

waltzmatildah February 23 2012, 07:06:28 UTC

THANK YOU!!! AND YOUR WORDS!!!

(though seriously, thank you!!! I'm glad you liked it!)

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waltzmatildah February 23 2012, 07:06:50 UTC

MOST SORRY, BB!

nereemac February 21 2012, 20:29:19 UTC

And if it’s forgiveness he’s seeking then it’s not a privilege he deserves. Not now.

That pretty much sums up where Stefan's head's at right now.

As does:

I’m sorry...

Empty words that he could never truly mean.

Beeeeautiful.

waltzmatildah February 23 2012, 07:08:03 UTC

Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you think I've managed to capture where Stefan is at right now!! WOOOOT! I was a bit nervous about whether I'd pushed it too far, but yay!!!

Thank you so much for the awesome comment.

dante_kent February 21 2012, 21:18:16 UTC

I've always thought Stefan and Bonnie could be a fascinating relationship, and this works so much for me. I love your Stefan and his knowledge of what is right and what they did wrong, coupled with his understanding that it still doesn't matter. It's one of the essential TVD character clashes that I love so much. And this is pure Stefan:

I’m sorry...

Empty words that he could never truly mean.

Ridiculously in-character. As is the Stefan who half tries to make empty gestures. A burnt apology letter is his almost-repentence. Lovely. You and your writing kill me, and I love it. ♥

waltzmatildah February 23 2012, 07:09:51 UTC

YES!!! Stefan and his knowledge of what is right and what they did wrong, coupled with his understanding that it still doesn't matter. THIS!!!! THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT I THINK!!!!

Which is why I am more than okay with what the boys did, because it was so in character. And so perfectly THEM! But I also think Stefan in particular would have ~thoughts about it afterwards. Hence, THIS FIC! Heeee!

Thank you sooooo much!