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wallflowerlady

Culpable 7/?

Mar 20, 2011 15:31

Summary: Dean was hurt because Sam had been careless, and now Sam had to get on with what needed to be done. Now was not the time to give in to his own aches and pains. Pre-season, hurt/ sick! Sam, minor hurt/ major angst! Dean, angst! John.
Rating: PG

Disclaimer: Would I be writing fanfiction if SPN belonged to me?

Part 6

( It was raining. )

sam, dean, supernatural, john, hurt/comfort, pre-season, angst

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darth_firefly March 20 2011, 15:20:08 UTC

+grabs kleenex box+ You're gonna fix this, right? Fix Sammy? +sniffles+ Please? And soon?

wallflowerlady March 20 2011, 18:10:19 UTC

Um... well... all I can say is, I'll be posting the next chapter (which is actually the last) tomorrow... ;-)

darth_firefly March 20 2011, 18:23:51 UTC

Break my heart why don't you?

wallflowerlady March 20 2011, 20:02:22 UTC

:-D

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purplehrdwonder March 20 2011, 15:22:23 UTC

Well that was just a cruel place to end that! Our poor Winchesters, ahhh.

wallflowerlady March 20 2011, 18:12:21 UTC

Heh - I know, I'm awful :-P But I also feel a little sorry for them, for putting them through this...
Final chapter up tomorrow...

myspn_addiction March 20 2011, 18:28:34 UTC

*screams* no! sammy! oh sammy no! please fix him... *tears*

wallflowerlady March 20 2011, 20:04:13 UTC

Ah *hands over tissues*... I know, I'm really awful. Final chapter will be up tomorrow...

myspn_addiction March 20 2011, 20:06:49 UTC

No ur wonderful... hehe I love hurt sammy! Oh it breaks my heart... aw!

wallflowerlady March 20 2011, 20:09:16 UTC

It breaks my heart too! (But not enough to stop reading and writing it :-P) He's just so adorable when he's hurt... and it provides such wonderful opportunities for Dean to be an awesome big brother *sigh*

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dontknowmyname March 21 2011, 03:11:13 UTC

I just found this story and I haven't been able to stop reading it all day. Occasionally I had to walk away to grab a tissue or something, but this is seriously amazing. I tear up at every chapter! I want to be angry at you for making me cry lol, but all I can do it think you're awesome for writing such a great story. Thanks you!

However, you better fix him. =P

wallflowerlady March 21 2011, 10:33:28 UTC

Yay, I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I must admit I personally enjoy fics that make me cry, as long as they have happy endings. I'm not going to say whether this has a happy ending or not *da dum da dum* but I am going to post the final chapter today when I have enough time (and the internet is working).
Thanks so much for the lovely comments!

si_star_x March 21 2011, 10:01:58 UTC

Oh. My. Gosh. My heart. My heart is racing but it feels all torn up. This was... guh. Okay. I loved the way Dean offered him food, a doggy and the Impala in an exchange for getting better. I hated how Sam said that he didn't think he was going to make it. This whole thing is just... blah. I love it, oh how I love it, but it's got my emotions on a hook and you're just tugging away. This fic is just so brilliantly done, I can't compliment it enough nor find the most concise way of saying that I adore it. So, you've made me hurt, but in a really, really good way.

ALTHOUGH I MUST SAY THAT THE ABOVE ICON IS DOING *NOTHING* BUT MAKE ME FEEL EVER SADDER. I LOVE IT.

wallflowerlady March 21 2011, 10:38:16 UTC

Heh - I should be really apologising for manipulating your feelings like this, but I find I'm kind of pleased. Oops - I guess that makes me a really nasty person... :-P
I do feel bad for the boys in this chapter, though. I was pretty mean to them. But I couldn't help it. Sick Sam... crying Dean... hugs and cuddling... oh how I love it...
I am going to post the final chapter today, as soon as we have reliable power and internet (oh, the dubious joys of living in a small African country!) I hope you'll like it :-)

si_star_x March 21 2011, 10:45:48 UTC

No, no. No apologies needed. I love having my heart stomped on - it's so much better than not feeling anything at all. You were very mean to them! But it's okay, I love them tortured and sad like this. Hee. ♥

I'm sure I'll love it! I've loved every chapter so far. It's just going to be sad when it's all posted, I've enjoyed following it through from the original hunt, Sam running for miles, collapsing on the bathroom floor... it has been a ride, that's for sure.

wallflowerlady March 21 2011, 10:53:08 UTC

Usually I'm pretty relieved when I finish a fic, but I did find I was rather sad when this one was done! As awful as I was to the boys (:-D) I enjoyed writing it. I think that's something I love about writing fanfiction - you never have to say goodbye to the characters when the fic is written, because there's another fic just waiting to be written about them!
I'm actually trying to post chapter 8 right now, but LJ is being difficult :-/

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