Mistakes (3/4)

[wakingnitemarex]

Title: Mistakes (3/4)
Author: wakingnitemarex / hatemetoday_xx
Pairing: Cookstro; Jason/OMC; Mavid
Rating: NC17
Warnings: Rape; probably swearing
Disclaimer: Best not be real. Or I might have to throw a fit.
Word Count: 4395
Summary: Jason's past is discovered, and David and Michael meet again.
Author's Notes: Dedicated to degreesofevil for so impatiently waiting for it. Love ya, hun. Hope

Comments

[timeofdying]

FINALLY! :p

I loved this as always and can't wait for what's next. And I'm so gonna sound like a/an [insert random adjective here] for wanting them to forgive Michael (what? I like Michael more than Jason, sue me).

...DREO FIC!? YESPLZ.

[hatemetoday_xx]

Hey. At least I wrote it. Lol.

Tsk, tsk. But Michael raped poor Cookie! D: Should we, like, burn him or something?

xDDD;
They aren't the main pairing in it, srry. May someday write just a Dreo fic, though. :]

[timeofdying]

But Michael's hot was drunk and I just want my Mavid reunion so I don't have to avoid any Cookstro-ness. Unless you want to write in some Cookleta action. Ahem.

There's still Dreo in it.

[wakingnitemarex]

Well duh. Drunk is not an excuse. D:
Pft. There will be no Cookleta in Mistakes

[allowedtobesad]

AHHHH! Sorry it took me so long! I had to go back and read the previous chapters. Haha.

You know I always love your writing and your characters. Your David's so believable, it's sad. I understand him wanting to forgive Michael so badly. :( And Michael, with all his trouble controlling himself and the battle between what's comfortable and what's right. And of course, Jason, who's just Jason. :)

<3333

I personally wouldn't want to forgive Michael for anything, but hey, that's David. I have a feeling I'mma be sad about what's going to happen. :(

[hatemetoday_xx]

:O
Have you not read Mistakes, or did I just take so long that you forgot? XD;

Thank you, babygirl. *hugs*
David breaks my heart a little.
And I just.. guh. Michael.. I want to hate him, and I want to slap him and yell at him, but he's trying and you can't not give him credit for that.
Jason.. <3!

<333333333 :D

Haha. Well, I only sorta know the ending, so I can't even give you a hint as to how it'll make you feel. D:
Sorry.
<3

[allowedtobesad]

Dx Of course I've read it before! I have a lot of problems reading chaptered fics when they're still in progress because I read so much other stuff between postings that I forget what's happened in previous chapters.

-hugs back-
Ughhh I know! I feel bad for Michael, but at the same time he's just so impulsive and wants everything to be right, right now, and I don't like that in general, so it just makes it worse in the situation!

<33333333333333! <3 <3 :D

That's okayyy. I'm just trying to prepare myself in case, haha.

[flux88]

"It means that somebody has to hate you for what you did. Somebody has to acknowledge it. Somebody has to be there to make you remember what happened." He locks his gaze with Michael's, his eyes full of hate, but if Michael were to look deep enough, he'd be able to see the terrified boy behind the fury. "We both know it's not gonna be David, and we both know, don't even lie, that it's not gonna be yourself, so that leaves me. Now get your fucking hand off of me, and walk away."
Oh bb, my heart shattered at that. It was dangerously close to breaking and that did it.

You know, if you want to know my feelings on this chapter, read smackmydishup's comment again. Her comment sums up all of my thoughts perfectly.

Oh, on a side note. You know what I really like about your Jason? Its the fact that he has his big boy pants on. Normally, he's innocent, shy, goofy, and other adjectives like that, but in this he's just so much more. Like, he's actually a man instead of a boy; If that makes any sense at all.

[hatemetoday_xx]

Ack! *runs around frantically looking for tape so she can tape your heart back together!* ;_;

Awwww. *hugs*
I hope you weren't crying as much as she was! D:

*___*
Thank you so much. That really means a lot to me. Thank you, thank you. <33333 I'm so glad you like Jason in this fic. :D
It makes complete sense.

*hugs you!*

[samsclub4]

mk so i forgot to add this journal when i got my new lj and so i almost missed this! but luckily you reminded me so yay! all is right in the world.

omg so sad bb. you don't know how hard i was crying. but so beautifully written. seriously, you are amazing :)

[wakingnitemarex]

haha. I was wondering why you didn't comment. D:
Did you miss Chapter 10 of Someday, too, or just not comment?

Awwww, thank you, hun. You're amazing, too, bb. and and DON'T CRY! ;~; *gives you tissues!*
<333

[cherazz]

WOW! What a brilliant follow-up to the last...I'm speechless. Jason...you've written him so fucking well. I've fallen in love with him (something I thought impossible). This whole fic breaks my heart, yet I love it so much. I'm eager for chapter 4. I know it will be amazing!♥