Stay (1/1)

[wakingnitemarex]

Title: Stay
Author: wakingnitemarex / hatemetoday_xx
Paring: Mistro/Johnstro
Rating: PG15
Summary: Why don't you stay? I'm down on my knees, I'm so tired of being lonely. Don't I give you what you need?
Disclaimer: Not real. I do not own these men. Nor do I own the copyrights to "Stay" by Sugarland.
Author's Note: So I was listening to my iPod in Chem while working on another

Comments

[bloody_pickle]

OMG I luuurve this <33

Poor Jason being strung along like that but at least he stood up for himself! And Michael finally came through <333 He should make it up to Stacey buy letting her watch

( random: How fucking weird would it be to go on the internet and find fanfiction about your husband cheating on you with a man? And sometimes you being involved in the fic? I would freak out)

[wakingnitemarex]

=D! yay! Thank you, bb! <3

I know. *sniff* Why is always the one in the angst fics? lol.
*proud smile* Yes. Good Mikey! <33
LMAO. That'd be awesome. But she'd have to tape it, y'know, for us crazy folks.

(( yeeeea. that would be a little awkward. xD; ))

[lonelysarcasm]

I think things like this all the time. I mean, how would it feel to find a fic about you, period? Like Jason. If I were him and I googled myself (as I'm apt to do) and found stories like this, I'd freak out a bit. Especially when they're portraying him as gay rather than straight. I like to think he and other celebs/AIers have better things to do than google themselves, though.

[elenauial]

Haha, I've actually thought about it and I think I'd find it hysterical. Haha, I would totally love it if someone wrote fanfiction about me, no matter what it was about. XD

[rinnuninnu]

So sad and beautiful...poor Jason, but yay for the happy end and the tears and the love.<3

Love you!

[wakingnitemarex]

Thank you so much, sweetie!
Hee~ happy endings are nice. :D

Love you, too! <33333

[aligning_stars]

wow

i'm glad it ended happy. wow. cause i was crying. cause that song makes me cry like a little bitch to begin with hahaha. omg. <33333

sfm. <333333

[wakingnitemarex]

*_*
Thank you!

Why do I keep making you cry, bb?! ;____; I'm sorry! *clinging*
But yea. That song is some sad shit. A lot of country songs make me cry. ;;

<33333333333333 ilu!

[aligning_stars]

you make me cry because you're amazing like that. :D

ilu2!!

[saraxvicious007]

Yay I loved it. <3
I really like it when Jason's all helpless....yeah I'm crazy. :P I have to admit I almost cried, but it ended happily in the end so it's all good. ;-D

-Sara

[wakingnitemarex]

^_^ Thank you!! <33

Haha. You're not crazy. I love it, too. As do a few others.

Awww. ;; *hugs*

Hee~ I'm a sucker for happy endings whenever I can use them. :D

<333333333

[allowedtobesad]

I once debated on this topic about whether or not it is the content of the story that makes it a good story. I don't believe it is. There are only a finite amount of things that a story can be about and have the story be substantial - love, pain, growing up. What makes a story good is not what it is about, but the way it is written. Here, you take a common topic - choosing between loving someone and being in love with someone - and create a story around it. What I think makes your story good is the way you mold the characters into your world, but you keep their true personal identities as well. Insert example: Michael's lies are so fluid, so believable, that Jason could cry. He wonders how many times Michael has done the same to him. Fed him believable lies just to keep him strung along. Jason's eyelids flutter as Michael's fingertips trace shapes against his back. I think that Michael could lie through his teeth and have anyone believe it; you take this part of him and make it into part of your story that is johnstro!. And apply to

[wakingnitemarex]

I'm ...pretty sure that's a good thing. Right? ^^;

Hmmm. I can totally get that. There are only so many plots that you can write about. A story is more how you write it, not what you write. But you also can't just write something entirely on characterization, either.

I agree 100%. There's just something about Michael. He's just got that charm, or something. You just want to believe him.

^^; I did consider bringing Cookie into this, but then I decided I was in need of a Johnstro-happy ending. :D
Hope you don't mind. Lol. <33

Thank you for the long comment! :D!

[allowedtobesad]

Of course. :) I didn't mean it as characterization was all you need... It's one of the important things, definitely, but so is the syntax, the language, the created tension, etc. I, however, thought that your creation of characters excelled (and was easier to find an example :P).

Lol, darn that Michael, making us all fall for him and then be like "I'm married! *points at ring*"