like a stone [peter/claude] [1/1]

[wait_dont_go]

:-D

To start, am I the only one having problems with the post formatting here on LJ? When I copy and paste my document from Word into the LJ posting screen, everything looks as it did in the original document--until I go to post. After it's posted, there are sections missing, scrambled, words in bold and italics that weren't before, entire

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[gingerberrysnap]

Yay, it's posted! And formatted!

I still love this, and I'm so happy you're writing again! :D

I didn't comment on it when we were chatting about this before, but I really love this part too:

"But he remembers Sylar’s whisper, low and quiet, and doubts he’s as paranoid as he could be.

As he should be, because they have not found Sylar’s body."

That's Peter-- not as paranoid as he could be or should be, even though he knows better Adam. Some might say that makes him stupid, I just say he is too trusting. *g*

Also, thanks for the cookies and ice cream, because that totally reminded me I bought a pint of Bailey's flavored ice cream and it's in the freezer now. But not for much longer. ;)

[wait_dont_go]

The formatting sucked hardcore. I need to figure out what's wrong and fix it because I swear, like I said, I'm going to be seeing coding in my sleep.

*flails*

I'm happy I'm writing again, too, hee.

And you're welcome. Enjoy that ice cream! ♥

[gingerberrysnap]

You can count html instead of sheep. ;)

I did enjoy that ice cream. It's the closest thing to Dublin Mudslide I can find in Florida. But me having ice cream in the house again... FAIL.

[wait_dont_go]

You had to go and mention Dublin Mudslide. I still haven't been able to find it here, either. It's been like, a year. *wibbles*

What's with Michigan and Florida that they don't have their Dublin Mudslide on?

And if you have to, you can totally blame me for reminding you about the ice cream. It's only fair, lol.

[yeuxsee]

Oooh, lovely. I'm not a huge fan of Peter/Claude (but anything is better than Paire or, gods forbid, Pathan!) but the flow was really nice.

Certain phrasings are lovely too, like "shatters across the sky" and "paints kisses".

Mind if I add?

[wait_dont_go]

Go right ahead! :-D

And thank you for the comment; I'm glad you enjoyed. I'm not a big fan of Paire, either, but I may just be biased, haha. Plaude has been my OTP pretty much since I came into the fandom, as I started watching season one when it was halfway through it's original airing.

[visiblemarket]

Ah, this was great! Welcome to the pairing, I hope you write more of it.

I really liked your descriptions, and too many lines to quote all of them were absolutely wonderful but...this really was great. Thank you for it.

[wait_dont_go]

Thanks for the welcome! :-D I'm not new to the pairing itself, but I am new to posting, hee. I've been a bit hung up with my writing lately, and then, poof, this came out in two days.

I am definitely working on more. This pair is too much fun to leave alone. :-D

And thanks for the comment! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

[ibonekoen]

This story was very well-written. I love the way that you described things

[wait_dont_go]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed. :-D

[postal152]

This was really beautiful. I absolutely love your style - so dreamy and poetic. There's something epic about it. And I especially love the ending, Peter saying "I did this," wanting to be forgiven and validated. It's very Peter. And the last line is gorgeous. Guh. It's fics like these that make me wish I could write. (Then again why would I when authors like you keep spitting out fics?) ;] *mems*

[wait_dont_go]

*blush*

Wow, thank you! I'm really happy you appreciated it that much. :-D

I had some help with that last line, hee. englishmuffin2 said it didn't sound quite complete, and I'm glad she did.

Thanks for the mem! I'm hoping to have more fic out soon. :-D