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Fic: Loose Ends

Mar 15, 2011 19:48

Title: Loose Ends
Wordcount: 1626
Rating/Warning: PG-13 for character death, spoilers for the Great Game.
Disclaimer I don't own anything or anyone.
Notes/Summary: So! Here we are. Now you know what I can do- well, sort of. Some of it. Like I said- what you've seen really is just a tiny, tiny glimpse of what I've got going out out there, in the big, ( Read more... )

moriarty, sherlock, fic, halp, creepy, pg-13

Comments 15

innie_darling March 15 2011, 19:59:53 UTC

Very creepy and effective!

lindentreeisle March 15 2011, 20:17:34 UTC

Goddamn. Yikes.

arianedevere March 15 2011, 20:21:21 UTC

Cripes - until I got to the line "He held you back", I was beginning to think that it was John who was narrating! Then after that line I suspected Molly ... and I quite like that you never reveal who it is. Very clever!

wafflestories March 15 2011, 21:54:49 UTC

He could be anyone.

He could be YOU.

:D

teaforme March 15 2011, 20:23:49 UTC

That was chilling. Fantastic characterization--you nailed him.

eightnoon March 15 2011, 21:28:20 UTC

Creepy fix is creepy and I love it.