English help?

[wachamaru]

draft for Blue Lotus http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm6228477
proof read please? Krystal (ps. I made double sure it's petals, not pedals!)? anyone?

Comments

[karorin]

It's good. ^^
maybe "I will always be here to proof it" is weird..?
perhaps it's "I will always be here to prove it"? unless proof means something else...

[wachamaru]

Thanks, I keep getting proof and prove mixed up~

[butterflycoffin]

Uuuugh, I posted a huge comment yesterday (Actually, 2 days ago) but LJ ate it OTL

I'll do it again when I finish my homework~ Okay? <3

[wachamaru]

WHOA >< *KICKS LJ*
If it eats your post again, just email me?
Thanks in advance

[wachamaru]

*pokes* just a reminder XD

[butterflycoffin]

I'm lazy so I won't do repeats k? =3 Also, Uni is killing Krystal ;O

[butterflycoffin]

Yeeeeeeeees it posted!

Also, my net is capped so everything is slow and I can't use msn ;---;

Does Wacha-tan use google talk? I think I can still use that~

[wachamaru]

Thanks~
I love this song too but I've been afraid to translate it since the author found me last time (s/he didn't mind and left a nice comment, but it's so embarrassing to have the translation seen by the original author /// )
But for 3 nights in a row my ipod played this first whnen I put it on shuffle, so now I couldn't resist doing it XD

I don't keep my eye on google talk much, but since I check my mails whenever I've a chance, I'll probably see it if you send me a message there~ (hokorik[at]gmail.com)

[wachamaru]

Finally subbed it~
Reworded some of the sentences that were awkward, and hopefully slightly more comprehensible now... Keep forgetting to back up the changes on text file before subbing tho = =;
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RD7R0hp5w-w