English help?
draft for Blue Lotus http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm6228477
proof read please? Krystal (ps. I made double sure it's petals, not pedals!)? anyone?
“Nothing but darkness exist here”
You sigh, hugging your knees
From inside of your heart, I sprout
To become a shining blue flower
In the veil of the falling rain
With even your sight robbed away
Strugging in the mud, you reached out a trembling finger
When I touched that cold hand, yes
I knew the meaning for my existence here, Ah
“Nothing but darkness exist here”
You sigh, hugging your knees
From inside of your heart, I sprout
To become a shining blue flower
“Soiled water can never become clean again”
Eyes down casted, you said self-derisively
However, the singing voice of me who drank from this water
Had spread out its untainted petals
I was born from you
Please look at me without closing your eyes
In these hands that are clasped as if in prayer
A faint melody lit up
Until it becomes strength to start moving on
I will protect it without leaving
So even the scornful and contemptuous wind, yes
Cannot blow this song away into nothingness
Things like who won and who lost,
And what is “right” and what “should” be
Don’t look down on your one and only heart in this world
Because of things like these
The moment when you laugh happily
Is not something that you need to beg permission from anyone
Even if the whole world is to be your enemy
I will always be here to prove it
Yes, now from the resounding singing voice
Borns the innocence of your soul
The sound of the flower blooming
that is said to be heard only by those with a pure heart
You have surely heard it that day, Ah
Even if you were to lose hope
And want to sink away just like that
I will spread my sound in the deep depth of darkness
To hold on to the sinking body and rescue you
For millions of nights, the seed sleeps
To blossom into flower again in the sun
Even after I have disappeared from here
The flower that had bloom in your heart is not an illusion
“Nothing but darkness exist here”
You sigh, hugging your knees
From inside of your heart, I sprout
To become a shining blue flower
“Soiled water can never become clean again”
Eyes down casted, you said self-derisively
However, the singing voice of me who drank from this water
Had spread out its untainted petals
I was born from you
Please look at me without closing your eyes
This is not a lie, stretch your arm
And hold on to this shine
proof read please? Krystal (ps. I made double sure it's petals, not pedals!)? anyone?
“Nothing but darkness exist here”
You sigh, hugging your knees
From inside of your heart, I sprout
To become a shining blue flower
In the veil of the falling rain
With even your sight robbed away
Strugging in the mud, you reached out a trembling finger
When I touched that cold hand, yes
I knew the meaning for my existence here, Ah
“Nothing but darkness exist here”
You sigh, hugging your knees
From inside of your heart, I sprout
To become a shining blue flower
“Soiled water can never become clean again”
Eyes down casted, you said self-derisively
However, the singing voice of me who drank from this water
Had spread out its untainted petals
I was born from you
Please look at me without closing your eyes
In these hands that are clasped as if in prayer
A faint melody lit up
Until it becomes strength to start moving on
I will protect it without leaving
So even the scornful and contemptuous wind, yes
Cannot blow this song away into nothingness
Things like who won and who lost,
And what is “right” and what “should” be
Don’t look down on your one and only heart in this world
Because of things like these
The moment when you laugh happily
Is not something that you need to beg permission from anyone
Even if the whole world is to be your enemy
I will always be here to prove it
Yes, now from the resounding singing voice
Borns the innocence of your soul
The sound of the flower blooming
that is said to be heard only by those with a pure heart
You have surely heard it that day, Ah
Even if you were to lose hope
And want to sink away just like that
I will spread my sound in the deep depth of darkness
To hold on to the sinking body and rescue you
For millions of nights, the seed sleeps
To blossom into flower again in the sun
Even after I have disappeared from here
The flower that had bloom in your heart is not an illusion
“Nothing but darkness exist here”
You sigh, hugging your knees
From inside of your heart, I sprout
To become a shining blue flower
“Soiled water can never become clean again”
Eyes down casted, you said self-derisively
However, the singing voice of me who drank from this water
Had spread out its untainted petals
I was born from you
Please look at me without closing your eyes
This is not a lie, stretch your arm
And hold on to this shine