Harry Potter (Harry)

[w175n57]

so dead that i don't know what i'm writing. though i have a favour to ask you all : i need angst!fic. like cry-your-eyes-out angst!fic. like my-heart-is-broken-how-could-you-you-horrible-horrible-lovely-person angst!fic. because i have not read crying angst(or really read at all) in longlong time. x_x sankku.

title: the end
character: harry

Comments

[provetheworst]

WAUGH.

my lone quibble: the rating. pg. c'mon, now, 'tis a bit more mature than that, this is. i wouldn't have an eight year old read it. (& therein lies the problem with the rating system i suppose; do you rate on technicality of content, or on maturity?)
i like the broken grammar, the second person, the lack of capitalisation and the just sort of broken tragedy of it all because it could end this way. i doubt it will (fandom would shriek and there would be much gnashing of teeth) but i think it could-maybe-should.
"two little big words" i like too.

it would be a war, you realized just then, that would decimate the wizarding population, kill the children and move the median age up twenty years.
etc etc

[w175n57]

haha. upped it to pg13 for you - i suppose it was just one of those things where i'm so used to angst and minor gore that this didn't really mark at all on my radar. @__@

if jkr goes the way she's been going, harry&his hero's journey and all, the ending will be something sappy about his parents. not that i mind, but with all the lovely angst that could lie beneath that, why let it go to waste?

(most of the fandom would shriek, but i have a sneaking suspicion that a good portion of it would be delighted. >3)

[aethrin]

interesting use of the second person. bitterness. detached love that is not love because how can you love what's gone, pretty smoke?

what category for your angst?

[w175n57]

junior year is frying my brain, so the detachedness is as good as i can get when it comes to fic!writing now. speaking of which, sorry to hear about your english (english?) final. >_< those things are horrible.

uh, any angst. just so long as it's good ♥

[aethrin]

neh ... nothing to be changed except deny the memory. i do wish i was back in high school though. life was much more stress-free there.

hugs.

i do hope it gets better for you. the beginning of the year, at least from my experience, is worse than the end of the year.

shall try to whip you some tezufuji over the weekend ...

[crackfandom]

The last two lines. Omg. The last two lines... ♥ You sure damn well know how to write an ending don't you? Erm... Well... I don't know which ones you haven't read so I'll link them all to you. Lol. I have a bunch of Rikkai D1 recs here. I'm not sure if you've read them all but quite a few of them are sort of angsty?

[w175n57]

XDD;; i try - i usually think of the ending before the story, and this is one of those endings where it actually ended the way i originally planned. @___@ i'm happy when it does that, ever one in a million times...

ahhh. hehe, yes, i've read a lot of those, but there're a lot i haven't read too. ^___^ sankku. d1 is the one fix i can never get @___@ ♥