Originally the idea I had in my head was just of Duncan seeing Logan and Veronica at the Sadie Hawkins dance. Someone had posted on the VM board at fanforum that the two of them were so wrapped up in each other at that dance (though they weren’t together at the time) they probably wouldn’t even have noticed if Duncan had turned up at the dance with Baby Lilly. That's what spawned the idea for this. I couldn’t work the baby in though (a baby at the Sadie Hawkins Dance?! Uhhh…maybe not), so that’s why Lizzie was in there. I didn’t set out to have them romantically involved or anything, and I’m not *too* attached to having her there except as a a surprise at the end. What I mean is, she doesn’t need to be at the dance, so I’ll change some stuff round. I needed something to snap Duncan out of his staring and move him along (away from the dance, away from Logan and Veronica, etc), which is where the voice asking him if he was ready to go was for. You’re right though, I definitely need to tweak that
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