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virdant

fic-DBSK-Perfect Everything

Oct 12, 2008 17:45

Title: Perfect Everything
Author: virdant
Length: 1,771 words; one-shot
Rating: R
Genre: Tragedy, High School AU
Pairing: HoMin, JaeHo, JaeChun, JaeMin
Summary: Shim Changmin goes to class, not to learn about how cell walls rupture upon being frozen, but to watch Jung Yunho as he diligently takes down notes. He watches and he learns. He learns Jung Yunho ( Read more... )

pairing: dbsk jaechun, pairing: dbsk jaeho, organizational: fic, genre: tragedy, genre: au, one-shot, pairing: dbsk jaemin, pairing: dbsk homin

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changminiminmin October 13 2008, 01:17:53 UTC

spot =)

changminiminmin October 13 2008, 01:38:02 UTC

......... wooouuu

virdant October 13 2008, 01:44:56 UTC

Thank you for reading ^^

changminiminmin October 13 2008, 01:48:56 UTC

ahhh a sequel please like i dont know like those novelas were you thought that one was dead BUT OHHH SURPRISE he was in a coma, and he have a twin brother that wants justice and i dont know what im talking about ok bye =)

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vampy_82 October 13 2008, 01:26:01 UTC

WOW!!! Very disturbing, but great at the same time!!! Caning Minnie is quite HOT in a psycho/disturbing kind of way =] Thanks for sharing...

virdant October 13 2008, 01:32:37 UTC

Thank you for reading ^^

I'm glad that you found it good; thank you for reading.

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virdant October 13 2008, 01:42:05 UTC

Thank you for reading ^^

I understand the dislike for HS-AU fics, though I do write them because it sets a very understandable framework for the story. I'm glad you liked this though.

I'm glad you feel for Changmin! Changmin's very practical, so I did hope that the practicality and the knowledge that I tried to tie into his narration wouldn't make him hard to understand... if that makes sense. So I'm really glad you feel for him. Though at the same time, Changmin's calculations are off not because he wants much, which is one part of the equation, but rather because he lives in a different culture.

dongbangboys October 13 2008, 01:38:42 UTC

oh wow...

really, I'm speechless..

the way Changmin narratated, its so haunting but you just cant stop... wow..

virdant October 13 2008, 01:44:33 UTC

Thank you for reading ^^

Changmin is a rather disturbing narrator; I'm glad that it's a riveting story.

Thank you.

kurogoma October 13 2008, 02:18:43 UTC

changmin is psycho, but that sort of one-minded intensity is rather attractive. i wonder how he could love (yunho) with passion when he had so coldly and systematically plotted jaejoong's death.

virdant October 13 2008, 04:59:21 UTC

Thank you for reading ^^

Well, in the long complicated reasoning, it's because Changmin lives by different definitions than most of us; he doesn't regard Jaejoong as a person so much as a blemish on Yunho's perfection, though that's just my opinion.

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virdant October 13 2008, 20:40:10 UTC

Well, it has to do with the definition of a person; Changmin views Yunho as "the person," or the ideal person ( ... )

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