[Fanfiction] - Title: Those Three Little Words: They Don’t Come Easy [Part 2/4]

Jul 29, 2011 02:22

100 Themes Challenge
Title: Those Three Little Words: They Don’t Come Easy [Part 2/4]
Pairing: OnHo/TofuHo, brief and past JooNew (Joon/Jinki), brief and past JongYu and brief mentions of other pairings including some crossovers.
Rating: PG-15/R (warning for some explicit language and mature themes)
Prompt: 2. Love
Genre: AU, Romance, Drama, Angst-ish, ( Read more... )

pairing: onho/tofuho, rating: r, !fanfic, type: 100 themes challenge, !fandom: shinee, rating: pg-15

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villa_visualkei July 29 2011, 04:11:48 UTC
WOW ( ... )

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kaybee38 July 29 2011, 03:16:54 UTC
Oh my. I love this! And OnHo is my OTP too! You're writing is pure, and emotional and very clear. I was literally grabbing my chest and gasping at part os this. I can't WAIT for the hext part! This is so good. I truly hope Minho hangs on just a little bit longer, so that Jinki can sort out his feelings.

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villa_visualkei July 29 2011, 17:28:40 UTC
Ah thank you very much! (=^O^=).
They are my second OTP... they are too good to resist. Heh. I am glad I could do your OTP justice though!

Wow, thank you for such kind words. I will try and get part three up Today, if LJ will cooperate. XD~. I hope it doesn't disappoint.

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment, :3.

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villa_visualkei July 29 2011, 17:53:57 UTC
-Nods-. He really needs to let Joon go ne.

Ah, thank you so much, this means a lot to me because I really love your writing and "Who Needs Logic?" is like one of my favorite fanfictions. Sorry about the the awkward ending, ha. It's really annoying I know, but I had to split it because it was too long. I'm going to post Part Three Today all being well. XD~.

I WILL I PROMISE!!!!!<3.

Thank you, grammar is really a vice for me. I also over use certain things commas and semi-colons, so please forgive that. Plus I swear I am awful at proof reading, heh :3.
I honestly thought my writing was kind of NOT clear, looool. I suck at explaining things normally so thank you for saying that! (=^O^=).

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment, your kind words cheer me up. XD~.

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villa_visualkei July 30 2011, 02:47:30 UTC
Wow, thank you. -Feels embarrassed-. It makes me happy to hear you say that because when I read the first and second chapter of "Who Needs Logic?" I instantly thought it was amazing and I wanted to be able to write a chaptered story like that... but I am pretty useless with chapters.
OMG is it totally weird that I had a fangirl moment over the Jungle Book? LOOOOOL. I actually... -bows down to you for that-. How do you come up with these things? XXXXD~. -Sings along in my head-. (^O^).

Man, I feel showered with compliments -does happy twirl-. I always worry that I don't have enough emotion or I am not explaining things well enough. So I AM GLAD!!!!!
HAHAHAHAHA! It's okay I don't mind. Creep away, :3 ( ... )

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ontaejongminkey July 29 2011, 14:03:25 UTC
Hands down.
incoherency.

sits down in a corner to wait for the next part ♥

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ontaejongminkey July 29 2011, 14:04:07 UTC
Wait, I forgot something....

PERFECT ♥

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villa_visualkei July 29 2011, 18:01:10 UTC
Hahahaha -pats head-.

I am hoping to post Part Three Today, so hopefully you wont have to wait long. I hope it doesn't disappoint -feels slightly incredibly nervous-.

PERFECT! SQUEE!!!! (=^O^=).
Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment.
♥ :3.

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ramen_lover30 July 29 2011, 23:48:35 UTC
I like long fic~
It's good to make fic more specific and detailed. I like the flow of story since it doesn't feel like been rushed, especially with Jinki's problem.
Overall I love it very much!

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villa_visualkei July 30 2011, 02:50:49 UTC
Me too... not so keen on writing them though, heh. XD~.
It's exhausting on the mind.

Oh thank you, I was really worried that it was coming off as rushed. I wanted it to seem natural.
I will try and get the rest up as soon as LJ is nice and lets me possible. I hope the wait isn't too long.

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment.

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