[Fanfiction] - Title: Those Three Little Words: They Don’t Come Easy [Part 2/4]

[villa_visualkei]

100 Themes Challenge
Title: Those Three Little Words: They Don’t Come Easy [Part 2/4]
Pairing: OnHo/TofuHo, brief and past JooNew (Joon/Jinki), brief and past JongYu and brief mentions of other pairings including some crossovers.
Rating: PG-15/R (warning for some explicit language and mature themes)
Prompt: 2. Love
Genre: AU, Romance, Drama, Angst-ish,

Comments

[villa_visualkei]

WOW!
I really wasn't expecting this. Thank you so much for taking the time to be so thorough and explain everything.
Your right, I am terrible with cluttering things (I'm like that in everyday life). I had only intended to mention people briefly, and I have read so many fics that have had other characters in and made them really work, and you feel like you’re being showed this whole new world of people and their lives... but I kinda ramble a lot. It's a bad, bad habit. Some don't fit I know. LOL.

If I hadn't of already written the whole thing up, I would make changes too it, but honestly what with it being so long I probably won’t now. Not right now anyway, especially with how LJ is acting up at the moment.
Joon doesn't appear again after that... I mean is that okay? I just didn't want him to take over Minho and Jinki as a partnership. I wanted to show how Joon had changed slightly but more hint at it than spell it out. I'm not sure I achieved that really... (=^~^=).
And about Jinki, now that you’ve mentioned it I don’t think I end up explaining his situation very well… like it may seem rushed. Minho is important to him though and I wanted it to be like he knows how he feels inside and what he wants but he is being held back by himself… or his teenage alter-ego, looool. Does that make sense? -Looks worried-.

Thank you for your advice, it really means a lot that you would take the time to share your opinions and areas of improvements. It really helps me to know where I can do better in the future, :3.

[villa_visualkei]

Heh. Thanks, but I do ramble a lot anyway. I really can't help it. I am just one of those people that take awhile to get to a point, looool.
Ha, that is a good point... I think my thing is that I like them to look a certain way... so like you know for SHINee if it is in a certain single era or something, I like people to know how I see them exactly in my head. If you see what I mean, :3.

Ah, okay. Yeah that was what I was kind of aiming for. So it makes me happy that you say that. Because in a way I didn't want Joon to be too different, you know like have a complete personalty by-pass. HA. Plus in the flashback I tried to show how he felt some guilt towards his actions even then, but was more worried about his reputation.

Thank you. I am glad you think it makes sense, sometimes I feel like I don't make any sense at all. Heh (^_____^).
Hahahaha, yes the desire! XD~.

Thank you so much for your comments. I love long comments like this. (^_^).

....

OH!

Opps sorry, in regards to your first comment:

Really you've never read Minho and Jinki before?
Ah, well their my second OTP now. They are actually pretty perfect together. Of course my OTP is still OnKey though, but sometimes I do like to read other pairings like you said it can be fun. XD~.

It is true. There are not that many fan fictions based around SHINee, not when you really think about it, and pairings like Minho/Jinki or Jonghyun/Jinki are not written about a lot. It's a shame really.

Thank you~<3.

I’m glad you may step into the OnHo/TofuHo world now? Kekekekeke~.

XD~.