I was a weird little kid...

Dec 24, 2006 00:46

In honor of my WFA runner-upness, I thought I'd post some examples of my very early writings as a kid. This is also part of my research for my next Secret Santa fic ( Read more... )

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wispywillow December 24 2006, 21:13:12 UTC
((I'm using that avatar as a little Christmas gift for you ^_^))

Aww, widdle Caroline poetry! They're cute!! X3

And congrats on your runner-up status ^_^ Did you get good comments on your story?

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vigilante_wake December 25 2006, 04:36:17 UTC
I'm using that avatar as a little Christmas gift for you ^_^

Whoa. Merry Christmas to me! Who is that supposed to be?

I have no naked man avatars to give you in return...Is Green Arrow okay?

I guess you could call my poetry cute. I'll have to show you my home-made pop-up book entitled "The Journey to Sunny Vally" sometime.

Thank you! I got some very good comments on my story! Thank you for giving me the courage to post it in the first place.

Merry Christmas!

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jij December 25 2006, 00:18:39 UTC
Ah, you've made my Christmas Eve very Merry.

how long it took to pull my tooth
Ho hard it is to tell the truth.

Indeed, I think you've started to touch on some angst early there. That's...actually rather poignant. :)

Love the mafia flowers. Your post makes me want to go find the Trunk of Horror at my parents, crammed full of such joys. I vaguely remember writing a series of stories which personified each number and put them in relationships with each other (like 2 and 5 were married). No memory of whether I was writing 2/9 slash, though.

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vigilante_wake December 25 2006, 04:47:13 UTC
I'm glad these amused you ^_^

But oh, it's hard to take time out
When thers so much to talk abot

That's the couplet that really gets me. What business does a third-grader have using "But oh"?

I used to personify my numbers too! For example, most of the even numbers were girls and the odd were boys. 7 was an exception. She was a girl.

I used to think this was weird until I read about the Pythagoreans. They not only assigned gender to numbers, but also sexual preferences. 9 was a gay male.

Your post makes me want to go find the Trunk of Horror at my parents, crammed full of such joys.

Do it! You know you want to. And I want to read them.

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jij December 25 2006, 05:27:56 UTC
I used to think this was weird until I read about the Pythagoreans. They not only assigned gender to numbers, but also sexual preferences. 9 was a gay male.

That...is awesome.

Also, after officially friending you I glanced back at your older entries and deduced that you are responsible for my giggling madly about possums for the last week or so. So...thank you!

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vigilante_wake December 25 2006, 06:27:13 UTC
No! My secret identity!

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carrra December 25 2006, 04:49:50 UTC
Ah, these are classic. The one about skating is actually very good, I think - of course, you've always been much better with poetry than I could ever hope to be. "Caroline's Book of Poetry" should forever be shelved next to "The Ghost of My House."

I do look forward to your Bible illustrations; I believe you have described them to me before, since we had the same children's Bible growing up (I think?). Merry Christmas, indeed!

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missing_scooter December 26 2006, 01:14:00 UTC
jesus,

i believe you are the love of my life!

"come skating" is my favorite.

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vigilante_wake December 26 2006, 02:40:03 UTC
I love you too!

I thought that "Come Skating" was extremely clever when I wrote it...

Things that kids write/draw are always a good source of merriment.

Merry Christmas!

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