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fic - Remembrance Day 9

May 26, 2009 17:51

Remembrance
Pairing: TezukaFuji
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance, Drama
Warnings: shounen ai, spoilers
Disclaimer: Tezuka told Fuji, "Ich liebe dich." Happily enough, Fuji blushed.
Parts: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 |

A/N: This fic is still alive. And… this is where they finally… ;D

( Shiraishi was better equipped. Shiraishi had already learned the determination that he was just starting to learn. )

ficcating, remembrance, tezukafuji

Comments 3

a1y_puff May 27 2009, 01:16:36 UTC

Nyaaaaaaaaaa~
Finally, THE FIRST KISS!!! <333

"No. I just fixed my hair."
LOL. Tezuka and his vanity XD
(Yes, I know, he might just didn't want his family to be 'curious' if he went home with ruffled hair and crumpled shirt, but. XD)

I love the part when Tezuka said he'd be seeing Fuji off! d'aww, that was love <3
then, the part where he, of all people, said that they were all children. And then when he pushed Fuji's back to make him walk <333

And no, I don't think this kind of sullen Fuji is OOC :D
Somehow, I can see him like that XD

Thanks much for telling me bout the update! I loved it much!

p.s. if my memory serves me right, this is the 1st time there's an 'I' and some present tense in the narration? :D

vierblith_tefu May 27 2009, 01:45:07 UTC

oooh, you're icon shows first kiss. *puts up kiss icon too*

LOL. Yeah. Tezuka's No. I just fixed my hair. was double-sided. It was meant to show Tezuka's vanity and to hide from his parents the fact that he just made out with his best friend. XD

Oh, yes, I loved that bit too, where Tezuka said they were all children. I wanted to make Fuji smile, actually. But I just let his sullenness make him raise his brows at Tezuka. (Hello, Tezuka? A CHILD??? XD) And I loved that bit where Tezuka pushed Fuji's back too~~~ That was a little scene I thought a long time ago and this chapter just had to have it.

Yay! Great! I like sullen!Fuji, actually. He has to stop smiling too, after all.

Sure thing. And thank you for reading. *wonders what to update next* Ah, yeah, maybe The Missives for Rei-chan's resignation.

p.s. actually, nope, this isn't the first time the narrator said 'I.' But this has the more evident, less detached 'I,' I think. Maybe the narrator can't help but be more and more attached to 'you.' *coughs*

a1y_puff May 27 2009, 02:16:14 UTC

Nyahaha.. of course 'I' just HAS to be more attached to 'YOU', more than 'I' has now anyway xD

Oh yes, do update TM, and then maybe you could make time to write my request :p