Barely Breathing - Chapter 23

[victorianxrose]

Comments

[gold_fish_66]

awsome update!

i wanna know ville's doctoring skill's

im always getting hurt..

haha

[victorianxrose]

I'm right there with you. Thank you for reading!

[ambirdy]

yay! I am excited to see this new update!! I love your story! :D

[victorianxrose]

I love the fact that you commented. Thank you!

[bam_dilligaf]

Haha I'm quite a magnet for bad things too :D I really like this story and I can't wait for more updates x

[victorianxrose]

Thanks for commenting! I plan to update more soon. The next chapter is already 1/4 done.

[xdianna]

like it alot just read the whole thing
you rock !! keep on going

[victorianxrose]

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I hope you like the coming chapters.

[jen_sweetheart]

Congrats for completing your AA and getting accepted to your top choice college. Good Luck with everything! :)
At the beginning of this chapter I was thinking that this is going too slow, for me, but as I was close to the end it sped up and that made me happy. Sometimes it feels like this is her journal...like she writes her day to day experiences. I like that, I'm just dying to see more dialogue between her and Ville...start seeing some feelings getting developed -which I think is gonna happen soon? judging from that little smooch and the thoughts in his head :D.
I really like your story and I hope to see more updates during the summer <3

[victorianxrose]

I like the way you describe way the chapters are laid out. Don't worry we are about to hit all the angst driven chapters where our couple will start to understand their feels.