Comments | vesikirppu: fic: criminal minds - between the lines [emily/jj] 4/4

vesikirppu

fic: criminal minds - between the lines [emily/jj] 4/4

Mar 18, 2008 22:22

Title: Between The Lines (4/4)
Author: lysachan
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Paring: Emily/JJ
Word count: 5,707
Rating: R
Summary: While solving a case, Emily & JJ are forced to take a closer look at their relationship.

( between the lines 4/4 )

Comments 16

narcolepsy_slds March 25 2008, 20:51:42 UTC

loved it. thank you very much.
nicely written, great build-up, and of course my fave pairing at the moment.

vesikirppu March 26 2008, 12:48:13 UTC

Thank you so much! Glad to hear Emily/JJ is currently your favourite as well; I, frankly, can't get enough of them at the moment.

Awesome dani_po April 8 2008, 23:59:38 UTC

WOW this was really great
Couldn't stop reading

Re: Awesome vesikirppu April 11 2008, 06:07:46 UTC

Thank you so much!

serenitymeimei April 9 2008, 02:42:38 UTC

Oh, that was lovely! Lots of angst and yummy smut, just how I like it! Great job, sweetie.

vesikirppu April 11 2008, 06:08:00 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

atfm April 9 2008, 11:11:52 UTC

So, you wrote this, sent it to the writers of the show, and they made it this week's episode, yes? *g*

I loved this. It had a great flow to it and was such a pleasure to read. I'm simply amazed with what detail you constructed the case, all the profiling and the logical conclusions - it was all done with such care and accuracy. And you interwove the building relationship and the conflict between Emily and JJ beautifully with the rest of the story, the longing, their night together, and that painful feeling of finding that knowing what you won't have, having experienced it, is so much worse than being left wondering and yearning ( ... )

vesikirppu April 11 2008, 06:12:42 UTC

Wow, this is probably the most flattering comment ever, heh. I'm so glad that you liked the fic, and I'm relieved to know that the angst, for example, wasn't too over the top. Also, so great that the profiling part of things rings true for you; I was rather worried about its credibility at first.

Anyway, thank you so much for the kind words! :)

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vesikirppu April 11 2008, 06:14:24 UTC

Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! It's wonderful to hear that, in your mind, the characterisations sounded true, since that's pretty much the most important thing for me when I write.

Thank you! :)