fic: criminal minds - between the lines [emily/jj] 4/4

[vesikirppu]

Title: Between The Lines (4/4)
Author: lysachan
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Paring: Emily/JJ
Word count: 5,707
Rating: R
Summary: While solving a case, Emily & JJ are forced to take a closer look at their relationship.

Comments

[atfm]

So, you wrote this, sent it to the writers of the show, and they made it this week's episode, yes? *g*

I loved this. It had a great flow to it and was such a pleasure to read. I'm simply amazed with what detail you constructed the case, all the profiling and the logical conclusions - it was all done with such care and accuracy. And you interwove the building relationship and the conflict between Emily and JJ beautifully with the rest of the story, the longing, their night together, and that painful feeling of finding that knowing what you won't have, having experienced it, is so much worse than being left wondering and yearning.

The angst was gripping, but you you didn't overdramatise (is that even a word?) it and neither did you let the sweet ending become too mushy because all throughout the story, you interjected your lovely sense of humour. It lightnened the mood in several instances, and "2 weeks ASE" made me laugh out loud. *g*

This story had it all - a great plot with an interesting case and the development of a relationship, angst, humour, love, and it was so well-written. It made me ache and sit on the edge of my chair and laugh and "aww." Marvellous job. :)

[vesikirppu]

Wow, this is probably the most flattering comment ever, heh. I'm so glad that you liked the fic, and I'm relieved to know that the angst, for example, wasn't too over the top. Also, so great that the profiling part of things rings true for you; I was rather worried about its credibility at first.

Anyway, thank you so much for the kind words! :)