Teaser Tuesday!

[veschwab]

I need to find a pretty icon to represent ATB. Today started with a plot breakthrough. Let's hope the rest of the day goes so well.

This excerpt comes right after Mackenzie has spared a History for the first time:

I scold myself while scrubbing the dirt and dust out of the corners of the coffee shop.
He’s probably on Wesley’s list. He’s got to be

Comments

[sandy_williams]

I like.

Great description too. I can really picture this room and Mackenzie scrubbing the heck out of the floor.

[veschwab]

Thank you! Description is something I'm working on, since I tend to lean toward minimalism in that department :p but I'm really trying to work on it.

[sandy_williams]

I'm absolutely horrible at description. I tend to avoid it, especially in first drafts. That's why I appreciate desc that bring a setting to life without bogging it down.