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falling backward

Apr 14, 2005 20:59

Title: falling backward
Author: ashley
Pairing/Character: Logan/Veronica

Word Count: 744
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Veronica exits the scene, Logan muses.

Spoilers: Episode 1.18, “Weapons of Class Destruction”

Author's Note: Work in Progress. Unbetaed, first attempt at VM fic. Feel free to abuse/offer criticism.

( He told himself that she wasn't running away )

veronicamars, pg-13, veronica, logan

Comments 32

meegzi31 April 14 2005, 19:52:51 UTC

I've got to start off by saying that I don't usually leave feedback because I'm lame. But so far this is done really well. If you can keep it on track (some writers seem to lose focus the further into the story they get) I think it's going to be really amazing. I love the dialogue - the Alexander Graham Bell line was great. And the "Murder She Wrote" ring tone was CLASSIC. I loved it, lol.

My one critique would be post LONGER parts. Pleaseplease. I don't mind waiting for updates if the updates are going to be a good long length so I can really get into the fic. Or wait to post the entire fic when it's polished and finished instead of while it's still a WIP.

Other than that, this is awesome. Keep going! More now please. :D:D

xxlifeforsale April 14 2005, 19:54:55 UTC

I love it. Hope to see more soon.

I wish this is how it had really happened.

avid_slacker April 14 2005, 19:58:57 UTC

Please continue. I agree with everyone else that your take on Logan's internal monologue is fan-freaking-tastic.

not bad for the first time anonymous April 14 2005, 20:10:57 UTC

I think you caught Logan's voice. He was perhaps a bit less snarky than expected, but still not sweet. I really liked him thinking he was in a cheesy movie. That does seem very Logan-like.

And I liked the image of him following in her footsteps.

I hope you write more

khestral April 14 2005, 20:17:02 UTC

Wow. Lovely. Incredible. Extraordinary. More please, before I die of want!