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falling backward

Apr 14, 2005 20:59

Title: falling backward
Author: ashley
Pairing/Character: Logan/Veronica

Word Count: 744
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Veronica exits the scene, Logan muses.

Spoilers: Episode 1.18, “Weapons of Class Destruction”

Author's Note: Work in Progress. Unbetaed, first attempt at VM fic. Feel free to abuse/offer criticism.

( He told himself that she wasn't running away )

veronicamars, pg-13, veronica, logan

Comments 32

punkypower414 April 14 2005, 18:51:37 UTC

This might actually be my favorite take on what happened after the scene that had both my sister and I screaming at the TV in separate rooms.

ladyemma April 14 2005, 18:58:26 UTC

Wow. I absolutely adore this. You have Logan just absolutely spot on. More? Soon? Please?

starrymidnights April 14 2005, 19:06:22 UTC

That didn't, of course, change the fact that she'd stared up at him as though she were a deer caught in the headlights of his eyes, making him simultaneously want to chase her down the steps and start reciting Shakespeare.
hahahahahahahha. LOL, that's funny cuz it's so NOT Logan except maybe when it comes to Veronica.

I LOVED THIS. I think you have Logan down soooooo well. It was just beautiful... please keep it up.

evergleam83 April 14 2005, 19:19:07 UTC

His door was unlocked (he hadn't had time to think of such petty things as locked doors when there were damsels in distress to be worried about) and he slid into the driver's seat without a clue about what to do next until his phone rang, chirpily blaring the "Murder She Wrote" theme, the tone he'd assigned to Veronica Mars. He picked it up without thinking.

Heeee. Logan would so give her the Murder, She Wrote theme as a ring tone. Great detail.

I also love the repetition of her first and last names, cause everyone on that show constantly calls her by her full name, and Logan especially when he's trying to be snarky or defensive or whatever.

Anyway, I love this. Your characterization is almost spot on. I'm not really in a state of mind to offer any serious/helpful criticism right now. :P

alocalband April 14 2005, 19:34:01 UTC

Oh wow. That was EXCELLENT. You got Logan down so well... damn. I'm completely jealous. And the dialogue was spot on. Superb. Awesome. I'm running out of adjectives that do it justice ;)

Please write more of this. Please write more in general. I would love a continuation, but just other equally good fics would be wonderful. This was a very well written piece.