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Fic: All Brawn and No Brains (Logan/Dick/Beaver) PG

Aug 18, 2005 20:59

Title: All Brawn and No Brains
Author: schnappycat
Pairing/Character: Logan/Dick/Beaver
Word Count: 1,715
Rating: PG
Spoilers/Warnings: None
Summary: Logan didn’t think Dickie was the smartest boy he had ever met.
Notes: Written for thevmfanficutopia challenge. Feedback is kindly appreciated. Huge thanks to my awesome beta ladydisdain225.

( Logan didn’t think Dickie was the smartest boy he had ever met. )

dick, pg, cassidy, schnappycat, challenge response, logan

Comments 18

havemy_heart August 18 2005, 20:18:16 UTC

Very cute story from their childhood. And I'm glad that Logan realized how much cooler Cassidy is than Dick! I think Cassidy is at least 100x better. Unfortunately, Logan and Dick are the same age, and they have that whole surfing thing in common.

schnappycat August 19 2005, 12:46:35 UTC

Yeah, in my head the surfing thing is what allowed them to become friends.

hidelawaylmae August 18 2005, 20:43:27 UTC

Aww. This was so cute! I love reading fics about when they are really young. This was funny. Great job!!

schnappycat August 19 2005, 12:47:04 UTC

Thanks! Writing little Logan was rather fun.

truemyth August 18 2005, 22:30:59 UTC

Aw. Dickie. Hee.

It's interesting you chose to give Logan so many "manly" moments. "Skating was for sissies" and the like, since he is so lovably fey at times on the show. Do you think that's something he grew out of?

I'm loving this challenge, but I think I like them more and more the younger the characters are. They just sound so cute!

schnappycat August 19 2005, 12:54:17 UTC

I guess I think Logan is rather complicated. Fey on the surface, but still "manly" overall. He likes manly things (surfing, fighting, drinking, etc), but is fey in the way he goes about things (movement, speech, etc) if that makes sense at all. I included a few fey moments in here too (gestures, swinging legs) to try to capture that. I don't know how well it came off, but that was the intent. I am afraid I am not making much sense here.

I love the characters young too. They do sound cute and it was fun to write.

three_fates1987 August 18 2005, 22:45:22 UTC

This was really fun to read. Awesome job with the child's POV, I especially liked...
He had been furious at Trina forever. Maybe even two weeks.

schnappycat August 19 2005, 12:47:50 UTC

Thanks. I don't know anything about little boys, so I sort of just guessed as to how little Logan might think. Hee.

syderia August 19 2005, 07:24:09 UTC

You gave Little Logan a very convincing child voice.

And this line made me laugh :
He had been furious at Trina forever. Maybe even two weeks.
Really something an eight years old could think.

schnappycat August 19 2005, 12:49:05 UTC

Thanks! I guess this line was popular, which makes me laugh because it was a late addition to the story. Glad I put it in. It is just funny how time is so different with little kids.