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Swept Away 1/7 (L/V, L/H) R

Jan 06, 2007 01:02

Title: Swept Away 1/7
Author: logan_love
Rating: R for language
Spoilers: 2x16 Rapes of Graff
Characters/Pairings: Veronica/Logan, Logan/Hannah
Dislaimer: If only these characters were mine. Nope, RT owns 'em all.
Summary: You'd think that after fifteen years of being with the same girl without a single second thought, you'd be pretty self-assured that ( Read more... )

logan_love, r, hannah, veronica, logan

Comments 15

jayne_190 January 6 2007, 06:40:13 UTC

Amazing start! Can't wait to see where this goes. Continue with the awesome work.

logan_love January 6 2007, 17:10:02 UTC

Thank you! This is a story that explores Logan's relationships and history. Most of it is already written, so it won't be long until the follow up.

la623 January 6 2007, 06:49:32 UTC

OH wow...this is just sad...but I still wanna see what happens! I love how you wrote it..can't wait to read more!

logan_love January 6 2007, 17:12:08 UTC

Yup, I totally lap up sadness. Don't worry, next chapter is a little happier and brighter and fluffier, per se, than this chapter. Chapter 1 just set the groundwork. Thanks, and don't worry, more is coming soon!

anonymous January 6 2007, 11:30:14 UTC

Can't wait to see what happens next. Oh by the way make Logan dump Hannah. Logan and Veronica are so much better together.

logan_love January 6 2007, 17:14:37 UTC

Don't worry, you'll soon be able to see what's coming. Some fluffy LoVe is coming up next, but in an angsty way. Which doesn't make any sense. Thanks for the feedback!

bluephoenix70 January 6 2007, 17:59:39 UTC

Wow! Thank you for not portraying Hannah in a bad light. I get sick of those fics. While I don't think she belongs with Logan, she's not a bad person. Please update!

logan_love January 6 2007, 20:10:55 UTC

Yeah, I get sick of the fics that totally abuse Hannah, because she WASN'T a snob or clingy, so I had to try to write one realistically. And the update is coming soon. Thanks for commenting!

a_h_c January 6 2007, 21:57:02 UTC

I think your set-up is interesting, the only thing that kind of threw me off was the part about L&V's discussions -- the things you gave them to talk about are all easily identifiable 2006/2007 topics in a fic that is set 15 years in the future. I felt like it brought me out of the timeline you were trying to establish. I am looking forward to seeing where you are going with this story, however.

logan_love January 7 2007, 03:19:13 UTC

Oh God, you're totally right. Stupid mistake, I just needed them to talk about something not at all deep. Maybe I should have talked about Global Warming and how they're all melting in the sweltering heat of Neptune California. Personally, I hope Supernatural is totally around in 15 years, though.

Let's please pretend that they're reliving the Golden Days of their youth... (yeah, how Golden...)

Thanks for the crit and taking the time to comment!