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Aleph 01: Primacy

Sep 23, 2011 20:35

Title: Aleph 01: Primacy (Pt 2)
Author: verocity
Fandom: 2PM / Beast / 2AM / SHiNee / Super Junior / Brown-Eyed Girls
Featuring: so many characters...
Pairings: everything's in the subtext
Rating: PG-13 for violence and swearing
Genre: Action and Adventure, AU/Canon mix
Summary: In which people are trying to get used to life after the end of the world.
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02 fandom: super junior, 03 universe: aleph, 02 fandom: 2pm, jokwon, taecyeon, seulong, kikwang, 02 fandom: beast, 02 fandom: 2am, wooyoung, onew, chansung, junho, donghae, yeoseob, 02 fandom: shinee, nichkhun, henry, hyunseung, changmin*2am, jinwoon

Comments 39

namikaze_jkc September 23 2011, 13:20:34 UTC

JJ>KFJXKH>I CAN'T STOP CAPSLOCKING I'M JUST GONNA REREAD THIS AGAIN AND FLAIL GAH...

I'm sorry..I an't really think of a coherent comment right now..

verocity September 25 2011, 18:24:23 UTC

Thank you for the support! <3

And there's no need to apologize. Knowing that my story drove someone to making an incoherent comment is somewhat vaguely satisfying. ;D

oxygenbubble September 23 2011, 13:48:46 UTC

Whaat. Onew has an invisible wall, nice. And Changmin has powers =D
I hope you get into what happened with the missing members of Beast/PM - DJ's missing =(

Another wonderful update, I can't wait for more ^_^

verocity September 25 2011, 18:27:50 UTC

Thanks! Hehe Changmin is too awesome to not have powers, amirite? <3 And so is Onew!

The other members... well, I'd be spoiling the story if I say anything here. So... we'll see in the following chapters? *grin*

shleyy September 23 2011, 14:16:55 UTC

this is absolutely brilliant, and I can't wait for more ! everything is phrased so beautifully and the shots of humour here and there make me n___n

i enjoyed this thoroughly and am looking forward to your next update !!

verocity September 25 2011, 18:29:16 UTC

Thank you! <3 I'll work hard on the next update to make it as good as (or even better than!) this one :D

elvenknight16 September 23 2011, 16:56:28 UTC

Bloody brilliant!!
I'm just glad I keep a broad knowledge of Kpop singers as the change of characters didn't phase me much =)
You did great on this part, its really amazing, the world that you've created is absolutely wonderful ^^
And I'm enjoying this story very much~
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Good Luck till then.

verocity September 25 2011, 18:32:15 UTC

Thanks! Hehe I was worried that the idea would be too weird for readers ;)

I'll do my best to make the entire story an enjoyable adventure!

PS: your icons are so pretty @.@

elvenknight16 September 26 2011, 11:03:15 UTC

Lol~
It isn't.

And Thank You Very Much Sweetie ^^

the_night_thief September 23 2011, 17:22:17 UTC

This is absolutely brilliant and amazing and ohholyfreakingshithisisklfjghaksdjfghakjdhfke.

The way you describe everything is so sttnning and vivid and fresh and just zdfjghakdjfhaakdsfh some more. ._.

I like the way you don't have entire groups as survivors. Like it's just Onew but dammit, my precious SHINee and Infinite, I want them to not be dead, why are they dead, this is not cool, I do not approve, my precious boys *cries*. Sure, B2st is still alive, all of them -- I think? But they're separated, and they don't know that two of their missing members are okay. It's a painful thing to witness, this breaking down of their humanity as they cope -- Hyunseung, precious boy -- but it happens and you've giving this such a real edge ( ... )

verocity September 25 2011, 19:47:50 UTC

Your comment. It is full of win and helpful points for me to keep in mind while writing the next chapters. <3 ( ... )