Growing up - Chapter 5

Mar 03, 2013 17:25

Summary: Naruto is a young boy who tragically loses his parents and as a result has to move in with his new adoptive family - the Uchiha family. How will his relationship with young Sasuke develop as they grow up? AU, multi-chapter.
Author’s note: Hey, my beloved readers. Strangely, the title of this chapter coincides with the moments I did most of ( Read more... )

rating | adult/nc-17 or above, misc | anime, genre | romance

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zinnia_23 March 3 2013, 23:31:25 UTC

That was nice. I'm glad Sasuke wasnt a jerk ... much. i kinda hate it when Naruto doesnt come out looking or feeling smart but this worked out well and in the dark to boot!!

What is the second plan???? Ah! a cliffie!! I'll forgive this particular cliff hanger cos i kinda thought that the call was from a peeping tom who saw the boys. So thanks for calming my nerves. phew!!

Fugaku better not keep Naruto in the dark bout this. Bloody coup plotter!!!

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vermilioncream March 4 2013, 23:05:02 UTC
Oh, I'm so glad you liked their confessions. I was so nervous about that because I tried to make them realistic, but still fun and a little awkward and romantic and so on :D
I don't like "stupid Naruto" either, but I kinda needed him to at least appear dumb here so that everything would wrap up nicely. Anyway I will not make him stupid, I promise.
I'm sorry about the suspense of the second plot, but I honestly just wanted to see if people would be interested in more development of the story.
Thanks for the review XD

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