LJ Idol - Week 1

[veritas_st]

Resolution

Every day she makes the same resolution, don’t give in, don’t let him look at you like you mean the world to him, don’t let him touch you, don’t you dare let him kiss you.

Comments

[adoptedwriter]

Very sensual. Well done.

[veritas_st]

Thank you

[i_love_freddie]

Very nicely done.

[veritas_st]

Thank you very much.

[fluffygremlin]

My talented wife!

[veritas_st]

My talented and beautiful wife!

[kittenboo]

This is just beautifully done. Your choice of words, pacing, and the use of blank space. I really love this.

[veritas_st]

Thank you so much x

[banana_galaxy]

Some relationships can just be too hard to resist. I think you captured that well.

[veritas_st]

They really can. Thank you x