Leigh!fic- Ruled By Secrecy (1/1)- Lucius Malfoy/Bellatrix Black

Nov 21, 2010 16:00

Title: Ruled By Secrecy (1/1)
Author: Leigh, aka leigh_adams
Characters: Lucius Malfoy/Bellatrix Lestrange
Rating: R
Words: 500
Summary: Narcissa knows her husband's secret.
Author's notes: Continuing on with the Blackcest... This was written for deatheatercest's End of Year Drabblethon. thepretender501 requested Lucius/Bellatrix with this prompt: I won't stop until I hear you scream. ( Read more... )

community: deatheatercest, character: lucius malfoy, character: bellatrix lestrange, pairing: lucius/bellatrix, character: narcissa malfoy, leigh!fic

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dexstarr November 21 2010, 22:00:03 UTC
Oh how I love your mind! Lucius/Bellatrix is a favorite pairing of mine, and then with Narcissa finding out...oh yum. He's gonna get it!

This line I just adored: She watched them the way a baby bird watches a snake; unable to look away. It was so wantonly brazen, so hedonistic; it made her ache with need.

*squishes*

BTW, there seem to be a few problems with your italics tags.

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leigh_adams November 23 2010, 03:17:07 UTC
*giggles* Well, there aren't that many het requests over there, so I'm picking through the very few ones and seeing what I can come up with. This one was a bit difficult, but I'm glad you liked it!

And HTML is fixed. *eyes it*

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thepretender501 November 23 2010, 04:20:03 UTC
Well, there aren't that many het requests over there

I can help you there *nods* :D :D

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dexstarr November 23 2010, 04:36:40 UTC
Mmm think I can help with some het requests too.

I seem to have no trouble coming up with prompts but writing is a different matter this month, grr.

And you know, coming back and reading the comments, this my Narcissa is more one to punish her husband for his transgressions... and I mean punish in the most pleasurable way. ;) OH YES. *flails*

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thepretender501 November 22 2010, 03:39:40 UTC
Oh this was brilliant! I love the setup and the flashback. I love how she's turned on as she watches the affair. The ending is my favorite:

The mood was set; candles were lit, wax dripping down around the room. The silk sheets on their bed were turned down, and her pale body was clad in her raciest lingerie.

Her husband would see how delicate his bride really was tonight.

Guh! Oh naughty Narcissa what do you have planned? And will Bella be along for the ride? :D

I hope to keep your muse tainted because I can not wait to read more Blackcest from you :D Thank you!

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leigh_adams November 23 2010, 03:19:14 UTC
Oh, I"m so glad you liked it! I fiddled around with a few different setups before settling on the flashback; it just seemed right, you know?

Dunno if Bella will be along for the ride... my Narcissa is more one to punish her husband for his transgressions... and I mean punish in the most pleasurable way. ;)

*giggles* We'll see if I can keep the Blackcest up. elle_blessing writes amazing Blackcest at wench_islands, if you're interested.

Thank you!

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thepretender501 November 23 2010, 04:42:29 UTC
Oh I agree, Lucius needs to be punished. Hee!

I rarely read het but when it comes to teh cest I can make exceptions (*ahem* not sure what that says about me lol). Anyway you're Blackcest has been delicious so far :D. If the het prompts don't come in I'll def prompt whatever you'd like to write. The more drabbles the better! Just pm me ;)

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elainemalfoy November 22 2010, 21:54:32 UTC
Ooooh I love how instead of being jealous, Narcissa is totally into it ;)
Hot.

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leigh_adams November 23 2010, 03:17:25 UTC
Thank you! :*

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hpfangirl71 December 22 2010, 14:14:43 UTC
Oh how beautifully done... I love how knowing just makes cissy determined to show Lucius how undelicate she can be... I think Lucius may benefit from the sisters rivalry!! :d

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