FINALLY! FICCAGE!!!

[velvet_mace]

I really hope this means that I'm done with my writer's block. I swear this fic was DAMN hard to write. I sweated over this. Anyway, this is rough and unbeta'd but at least it's DONE!!!! Thank you, mikkeneko for betaing this for me

Comments

[tir_synni]

*mewls* Hot! And I have discovered a new love for cinnamon oil. XD

[velvet_mace]

Hee. Personally,I'd be a wee bit careful about it. Unless you REALLY are a fan of pain.

[raveechidna]

Oh hell, thats it I cant think of what to do but the cinnamon oil part had me whimpering. Very nicly done as always, you really are the Smutt Alchemist you know that?

[velvet_mace]

Why thank you! I'm smutty for sure.

[devils_devotion]

Awesome, Vel. XD Though I really am tingling in anticipation for when Ed and Al finally wise up and start turning on ROY. *amused*

[velvet_mace]

That would be the last part of this series, when Ed and Al "teach" Roy how to treat them.

[wicked_pistil]

Much love for this:
"I do not!" said Ed indignantly. "I'm the epitome of masculinity, even in a dress."

"Yes, Ed, you are a real man's man," agreed Roy.

"Yes! Wait…" Ed stopped.

I believe I have been transmuted into quivering goo. This was perfect. And, oh Roy. The man is getting sentimental in his old age. ;) We do get to see the boys have their lovely way with him sometime, don't we?

Thanks for this. I've been anxiously awaiting its return. :)

[velvet_mace]

Yeah, I'm pretty sure there will be one more part to this, to wrap the whole thing up.

Oooh, gooness is good!

[lunar_wolf]

....you are an evil, evil person. You keep getting me to read squicky stuff and making me like it. Elricest is really not my thing, but I fear the FMA fandom will convert me before a year's out.

I have to agree with someone else's comment that Roy really needs to get his comeuppance. The brothers are at his mercy, and he seems to be alternately jealous and hurt by their emotional walls, but he brought it on himself by having the 'relationship' based in a twisted powerplay anyway.

Mind you, I'm loving this. This is proof positive I'm a sucker for threesomes (oh, the kink...one of many.), but...I'm not entirely comfortable with Roy's desire to have what he wants without consequences. The witholding of affection and love by the brothers is the exchange he gets for being in control of their bodies, but he seems to be trying to circumvent that.

Powerplays are fun.

[velvet_mace]

I'm hopelessly addicted to power plays. But I also realize this isn't to everyone's tastes. I'm glad someone else shares my perv.

Next part will be Roy getting his comeuppance.

[lunar_wolf]

I love powerplays. I read an amazing Snape x Hermione fic that was based entirely on a contract that put Snape in power. 'Course, that also dealt with the fact that the relationship couldn't be based on that offset balance of power.

I eagerly await Roy's comeuppance. Though I can't imagine how I'd pull it off --to me, the boys, or Ed at least, would be too pissed off at the whole situation's underhandedness to forgive Roy and offer up their hearts with just a little (albeit mindblowing) noogie. I imagine some new promises will be extracted that puts them all on equal (or perhaps superior) grounds. Heh.

Considering how badly it went the last and only time Ed was given the reins, this will be fun to watch.