Comments | velvet_mace: FINALLY! FICCAGE!!!

velvet_mace

FINALLY! FICCAGE!!!

Nov 28, 2005 17:31

I really hope this means that I'm done with my writer's block. I swear this fic was DAMN hard to write. I sweated over this. Anyway, this is rough and unbeta'd but at least it's DONE!!!! Thank you, mikkeneko for betaing this for me ( Read more... )

dubious con, fma: al, fma, contracts, roy, fma: ed, rated: nc-17, smut

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twisted_spark November 29 2005, 04:02:58 UTC

* fans self* holly, hot damn… that was nice

velvet_mace November 29 2005, 19:29:47 UTC

Thank you! That makes me very happy!

tromkehra November 29 2005, 04:08:49 UTC

Interesting XD! *Snickers* I think this gave me a couple idea's of my own to use in an rp that I'm in XD!!! Much love.... *Didn't really like the whole 'I'm god' thing... still can't do anything about it* XP

I do love how much of a sinister woman you are XDD!

velvet_mace November 29 2005, 19:30:37 UTC

Ha ha!

Well, the whole I'm God thing was just Ed kidding around. He doesn't really believe it. He's just being a jerk.

thisisnotmyname November 29 2005, 04:53:55 UTC

hello. alicia is no longer here, she is a quivering puddle of goo, seeping into the carpet below her computer chair.

velvet_mace November 29 2005, 19:31:31 UTC

Don't worry, I'll collect you up and put you in the fridge until you set up again.

I'm glad this hit SOMEONE'S kinks... though honestly, I'm not sure it hit mine.

cutiekittyg November 29 2005, 05:07:03 UTC

You're a frikkin' genius. Where do you come up with this stuff?

velvet_mace November 29 2005, 19:31:58 UTC

I'm very depraved, and I have no shame.

mikkeneko November 29 2005, 07:19:41 UTC

Roy turned his mind abruptly away from that train of thought. He didn't really enjoy hurting his lovers. It was just a game after all, nothing serious. And the games were as much for his lover's benefit as for his own.

Oh ho, Roy really is riding for a fall here. I loved this part, along with all the references to Roy being jealous of the love the brothers share and wanting them to love him as well. I don't approve of him pitting them against each other though. I won't be fully happy with this relationship until Roy gets taken down a notch or two... dozen. :) In the mean time there certainly is plenty of UST building up to it!

Some betaing:

the flush of power it gave him to completely control another persons appearance, There were deeper and darker levels to the kink as well. period, not comma.

Ed smiled and clapped his hands. Al's right arm suddenly shot over his head, like a child raising his hand to ask a question. Both Al and Roy stopped everything to stare at the sudden appearance of a thick leather cuff around his wrist, ( ... )

velvet_mace November 29 2005, 19:32:49 UTC

I doubt he'll be protelytizing any time too soon. He got a bit carried away.

Thanks for the betaing. Yea!! I'll get on that in just a minute.

velvet_mace December 1 2005, 07:34:12 UTC

And Done!