Comments | velvet_mace: Kitty!Al

velvet_mace

Kitty!Al

Nov 11, 2005 22:55

TITLE: Sacrifice
PAIRING: Roy/Al
RATING: R
WARNINGS: Chimera Al, Spoilers for the end of the Anime, the movie is pretty much ignored. A bit of bondage.
WORD COUNT: 7733 words (Dang it, why do plot fics always have to be so long!)

This is a prequel to The Perfect Companion
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rated: r, non-con, kitty-al cycle, plot, angst, fma: al, fma, roy, fic

Comments 52

anonymous November 12 2005, 17:29:50 UTC

I enjoyed this so much I don't know where to begin. Those last few lines . . . so well done. Marvels at the drunken writing talent. Also as a side note love the new icon.

Mab

velvet_mace November 12 2005, 18:00:43 UTC

Thank you! The sky_dark made the icon. It's Skinny!Al from Chapter 53 of the manga.

astizya November 12 2005, 20:55:05 UTC

Wow..., so dark and twisted. The sense of hopelessness and chaos - mostly due to the Gate's behavior - is especially disturbing to me. Al's helplessness is terrifying. And Roy makes me so sad.... For the record, I think his eye patch, scars, and limp are sexy.

velvet_mace November 13 2005, 07:31:45 UTC

The Gate is my deux ex machina.

I think he's sexy too, but in order... but in this fic...he was pushed to the very edge, and then the Gate tipped him over.

Yeah, poor Al. Roy really did mean well by him...

astizya November 14 2005, 03:50:58 UTC

Roy has to have his sex - and he doesn't want any of that pity sex, either! ...Guess that would drive any man to the edge.

youkofujima November 13 2005, 01:48:55 UTC

MUahahahahahah ohh HOHOHOHOHOO NISHSHISISHISHISHI. Oh god so incoherent with love right now.

Thank you so much for making my night. XDDDD

velvet_mace November 13 2005, 07:32:05 UTC

I'm really glad you liked this. Would it be ok if I posted it up on the communities?

youkofujima November 13 2005, 16:36:15 UTC

No problem post away XD--though last night when I was going to sleep I realized something that might need a bit of a change...^^; Might as well tell you now.

Roy actually still has several copies of Al swimming in the vat, so I don't know if you want to change it so that the Gate either didn't take ALL of them, or if Roy just created more?

velvet_mace November 13 2005, 18:41:10 UTC

What's he going to do with the rest of the copies?

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scico November 13 2005, 03:05:28 UTC

well, aside from all the pr0n parts... ;)

well written, as always. =P

It was kinda sad though.

velvet_mace November 13 2005, 07:32:59 UTC

What's wrong with the pr0n? (except that I totally limed it and this hardly rates as pr0n.)

scico November 13 2005, 07:35:56 UTC

oh nothing at all... *walks away slowly, then turns and rushes back at you, starting to choke you* ONLY THAT ITS PRON!!! *;)*

moinkys November 13 2005, 16:34:33 UTC

Hey Velvet_mace. I'm running a fanfic contest and a lot of my staff members have commented that they read your fics. I don’t know if you would be interested in entering or anything, but here is the link to the contest just in case:

http://www.freewebs.com/ironfic/

Oh ps: Not trying to promote, just going to people who my staff members referred to > .