Drabble for Vikki

[velvet_mace]

My son is threatening my daughter with a butt-x-ray. Apparently it's where you x-ray people with your butt. Pheonxi is very putt off by this. I'm not touching it with a 10 foot pole

Comments

[moumusu]

I should have mentioned that the last line of this hit me so hard the first time I read it that I swear I heard a sound effect or something. Like, ZUN. Owwww. ...if you still want my opinion, I think the stuff about Ed being beautiful does add more to it :DDD (Would this sort of chit-chat be more appropriate on AIM?)

[velvet_mace]

Thanks!

Chitchat is fine. I really can't go on AIM that much. Maybe an hour or two at night... that's it.

Yes, I like it when a punch line comes off.

[qem_chibati]

Oh wow. That was so painfula nd beautiful.

Ed's just so... Broken, but has that little flair letting you know he's still there at the end.

[velvet_mace]

There is still resistance left in him, but he's pretty beaten down. It doesn't stop him from being resentful at the core, but he knows he has to do what he's gotta do.

[cryogenia]

Wow. This was very powerful, in a heartbreaking sort of way ;_;

[kesenaixtsumi]

>w< ♥ Lovely drabble. Nyam, you will become part of my binder cover for the next few weeks. xD; :.cuddles drabble.:

[forgottenlover]

::late tot he party:: I love it, he's just so quietly attempting to get himself into it it seems ::headshake:: You LIE Ed