Comments | velvet_mace: My first House of Smex ficlet

velvet_mace

My first House of Smex ficlet

Jul 02, 2005 13:39

Decided to tackle Pregnant!Riza. It's kind of nice writing from the female point of view for once. I have NO idea where in the scheme of things this would fall, but if Riza ever got pregnant, I figured this would be one of her challenges ( Read more... )

rated: g, fma, fic, fma: riza, hos

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sky_dark July 2 2005, 20:54:58 UTC

LoL! Oh my, the cute factor here is deadly =D

velvet_mace July 2 2005, 21:04:00 UTC

It's nice to know I can write something other than kinky smut and angst.

I cried over many a commercial when I was pregnant, and I'm not the kind that cries.

sky_dark July 2 2005, 21:12:54 UTC

Yes you remember those Church of the Latter Day Saints commercials? They near about killed me, I had to run from the room when they came on =/

crazy_toffee July 2 2005, 21:15:08 UTC

AHAHAHAHAHAHHAAAAA! So... I've never been pregnant. But sounds like me on my period. XD I emote with Riza.

What a wonderfully portrayed image of hormonal reactions in a woman. Truly.

velvet_mace July 2 2005, 21:50:57 UTC

Heck, what happened there. I thought I posted something and it didn't happen.

Pms is to pregnancy like a shot glass is to a big gulp. I am NOT a sentimental person and I cried like a baby over SHAMPOO commercials! You sort of sit back and look at yourself in horror wondering what sort of mindcontrol your baby has on you.

crazy_toffee July 2 2005, 21:59:58 UTC

=_= I ph34r the time when I become pregnant, in the far FAR future. I'm already a mess every month.

velvet_mace July 2 2005, 23:41:33 UTC

Actually, for some women, there is the opposite effect. They actually get more mellow and even. But for most of us... who. PMS on steriods.

But the tykes are worth it.

agent_honeywell July 3 2005, 00:28:43 UTC

Hoo, sounds like my grandma on a regular basis, though she tends to tear up if you're even the slightest bit gruff with her. *imagines riza bawling when nobody will go buy her pickles* This is gonna be a fun series to read! :)

velvet_mace July 3 2005, 01:36:06 UTC

Towards the end of my first pregnancy, I was ready to KILL my friends when they couldn't decide on what take out to get. 20 minutes of bickering over Chinese or Pizza and I finally said, "I'M PREGNANT AND I NEED TO EAT RIGHT NOW DAMN IT!" They decided VERY quickly after that. I don't remember what they chose.

No food was safe from me, but that's a much later indignity.

kytyngurl2 July 3 2005, 01:24:29 UTC

A NEW HOS WRITER!!! YES!

*dies of happiness*

This is GREAT stuff! I love the realism (the benefit of experience, I am sure!), and somehow it's adorable (Hawkeye being like that is just Awwww!) and funny too (Tissues!!)

Wise men. Really wise men!

*so very happy now*

velvet_mace July 3 2005, 01:37:17 UTC

I've dipped my foot in the pond. Hope my stuff is a worthy addition. Hmmm. Probably should actually POST my second fic over there, shouldn't I.

kytyngurl2 July 3 2005, 01:48:01 UTC

It's QUITE worthy!!!

Heh, probably. :)

bard_linn July 3 2005, 01:47:02 UTC

Ah, someone who actually KNOWS what they're writing about! *is always wary of writing pregnancy fics for that reason*

Very, very, cute. ^_^

(Er, one thing. A request if you would. Usually we don't use fake cuts. We post the fics to the comm themselves for archiving purposes.)

velvet_mace July 3 2005, 01:54:35 UTC

DONE!

bard_linn July 3 2005, 01:55:36 UTC

Thanks a lot! ^__________^

velvet_mace July 3 2005, 01:55:02 UTC

Archiving... what the hell is that.

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