I love this! Really, it is so perfectly, depressingly good <3 The end just makes me want to cry because IT'S AKI AND KENZO! They belong together D: They do. I know they do!
You'll have more, I promise. And yeah, this is quite depressing to see them drifting apart like that... But well, life is life... and in a way, those two belong together, yeah~ ♥
Oh wow, I really like this! It's so...real, somehow. The fact Aki was happy but is no more, yet he cannot put his finger on why. The idea love may have simply...slipped away, somehow, without them noticing. Or at least it did for Aki. It's sad, so very very sad, but it's something that sometimes happen. For real. Things change and we don't really know why
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And this story just wrote itself, probably because it's based upon my own feelings~ and I think writing might just become a true escape for me. I think I have a lot of things to write down, and those two aren't even close to the end :P
As for the 'what happens next', who knows... I don't think neither of them do. Let's hope they'll find a solution~
Thank you so much again for this comment, and for reading, and yes, I will write more. I feel like writing~ =] ♥
I had a feeling, unfortunately, this was based on your own emotions. Such stories, when we write from within, are usually either excruciatingly hard or very very easy to write. They also tend to come out very good, when they do slip down on paper. But yeah, not happy you're feeling this way hun. *hugs*
I like this. When everything is not rainbows and roses.They are going to separate but without all the drama, and it seems they will continue to care for each other in some manner. Nicely done. :)
Life isn't perfect, and I'm kind of sick of those "they lived happily ever after". And no, I don't think they will hate each other. When it doesn't work, it just... doesn't work anymore...
Don't get me started with that because I might just try to write a threesome with them è_é (but it's gonna be hard, because since I read the Bible (A.K.A Learning), I have a thing for Tora x Kenzo... and though the three of them look good together... Tora and Zo... They're just... perfect.... ♥)
And thank you for the comment ♥ I'm glad you liked it despite the unhappiness of those two~
The borders in their relationships are getting seriously blurred :P the four of them can be pretty amazing~ so many possibilities~! It's endless~ 8D and that's why we love them 8D ♥♥♥
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Read it again xD
I love this! Really, it is so perfectly, depressingly good <3 The end just makes me want to cry because IT'S AKI AND KENZO! They belong together D: They do. I know they do!
*sniffles*
More of these, please! :D Love you, gorgeous <3
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And this story just wrote itself, probably because it's based upon my own feelings~ and I think writing might just become a true escape for me. I think I have a lot of things to write down, and those two aren't even close to the end :P
As for the 'what happens next', who knows... I don't think neither of them do. Let's hope they'll find a solution~
Thank you so much again for this comment, and for reading, and yes, I will write more. I feel like writing~ =] ♥
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nuuuuuu Aki and Kenzo are practically superglued to each other.
Oh but this is so pretty. Depressingly pretty. I like it. ♥
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Thank you for your comment~ :D ♥
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Thank you for reading and commenting ♥
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you are very welcome. ;)
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And thank you for the comment ♥ I'm glad you liked it despite the unhappiness of those two~
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