Fears [Oneshot]

Mar 27, 2012 14:47

Title: Fears
Author: velvet_liquor
Beta: musicalmimicry
Pairing: Aki (SID) x Kenzo (AYABIE)
Genre: Angst (kind of)
Rating: PG
Summary: “Are you happy?”


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: sid, :: aki x kenzo, : ayabie, ' oneshot, # pg

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musicalmimicry February 27 2012, 14:00:32 UTC
*snuggles*

Read it again xD

I love this! Really, it is so perfectly, depressingly good <3 The end just makes me want to cry because IT'S AKI AND KENZO! They belong together D: They do. I know they do!

*sniffles*

More of these, please! :D Love you, gorgeous <3

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velvet_liquor February 27 2012, 14:11:49 UTC
You'll have more, I promise. And yeah, this is quite depressing to see them drifting apart like that... But well, life is life... and in a way, those two belong together, yeah~ ♥

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invisiblehabits February 27 2012, 14:31:30 UTC
Oh wow, I really like this! It's so...real, somehow. The fact Aki was happy but is no more, yet he cannot put his finger on why. The idea love may have simply...slipped away, somehow, without them noticing. Or at least it did for Aki. It's sad, so very very sad, but it's something that sometimes happen. For real. Things change and we don't really know why ( ... )

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velvet_liquor February 27 2012, 14:38:27 UTC
I do love your comment~ ♥

And this story just wrote itself, probably because it's based upon my own feelings~ and I think writing might just become a true escape for me. I think I have a lot of things to write down, and those two aren't even close to the end :P

As for the 'what happens next', who knows... I don't think neither of them do. Let's hope they'll find a solution~

Thank you so much again for this comment, and for reading, and yes, I will write more. I feel like writing~ =] ♥

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invisiblehabits February 27 2012, 15:52:18 UTC
I had a feeling, unfortunately, this was based on your own emotions. Such stories, when we write from within, are usually either excruciatingly hard or very very easy to write. They also tend to come out very good, when they do slip down on paper. But yeah, not happy you're feeling this way hun. *hugs*

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shadow_fictions February 27 2012, 14:32:01 UTC
D:
nuuuuuu Aki and Kenzo are practically superglued to each other.

Oh but this is so pretty. Depressingly pretty. I like it. ♥

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velvet_liquor February 27 2012, 14:39:23 UTC
Yeah, Aki and Kenzo are a matching set that is not to be separated~ ♥

Thank you for your comment~ :D ♥

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magnuminium February 27 2012, 18:41:32 UTC
I like this. When everything is not rainbows and roses.They are going to separate but without all the drama, and it seems they will continue to care for each other in some manner. Nicely done. :)

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velvet_liquor February 27 2012, 23:11:06 UTC
Life isn't perfect, and I'm kind of sick of those "they lived happily ever after". And no, I don't think they will hate each other. When it doesn't work, it just... doesn't work anymore...

Thank you for reading and commenting ♥

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magnuminium February 27 2012, 23:26:02 UTC
Exactly. Oh I forgot to mentioned one thing- Tora Tora Tora Tora Tora. *giggles*

you are very welcome. ;)

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velvet_liquor February 27 2012, 23:28:39 UTC
Tora is such a temptation.... ♥

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velvet_liquor February 28 2012, 00:50:22 UTC
Don't get me started with that because I might just try to write a threesome with them è_é (but it's gonna be hard, because since I read the Bible (A.K.A Learning), I have a thing for Tora x Kenzo... and though the three of them look good together... Tora and Zo... They're just... perfect.... ♥)

And thank you for the comment ♥ I'm glad you liked it despite the unhappiness of those two~

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velvet_liquor February 28 2012, 02:04:39 UTC
The borders in their relationships are getting seriously blurred :P the four of them can be pretty amazing~ so many possibilities~! It's endless~ 8D and that's why we love them 8D ♥♥♥

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