Just a rough little something to get this scene out of my head. And what is it with me and the unpopular canon pairings? I'm hoping to find more Viktor/Hermione in OotP, too.
No beta, so it may make sense only to me, but here's a Sark/Allison snippet.
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There should be no need to be honest with her. )
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You know, as I wrote this I started to think, "Hm... Allison could really turn into another Marita for me, in that once I start writing her point of view she would just take over the story." So I'm kind of hoping that she's dead, because I'm not sure I want that to happen. Me and the utterly inexpressive characters, again.
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Yeow, that's tasty.
This:
But they are as bound by that training, he is as beginning to think, as anyone else.
Wonderful. True.
More?
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(Oh, and btw, I thought your post on not having spoilers for Troy was hilarious--I meant to comment there but lj was freaking out on me.)
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And Allison's "Don't be stupid" is perfect. I could hear her in the finale, saying those words to Sark. Now I'll always think that was a habitual phrase of hers.
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*g*
This was a kick, from start to finish. This one line really intrigues me the most:
He suspects that her presence in his life is the result of a wager she made with herself, although he's never learned the terms of the bet.
Yeah, now I wanna know who these people are. DAMN YOU!
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Thanks! I'm really thrilled that you like it, and also pretty pleased that I'm sucking you in to the fandom. (And the answer, at least in Allison's case, is "a very minor character indeed." I wanted to know who she was, too, so here we are.)
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Yeah, yeah. Now go get busy on that Viktor/Hermione story; I adored the other one you did for them.
:::suction sound as Kristen gets dragged into Vanzetti-induced fandom #3 where she knows no one:::
P.S. I'm catching up on G-EMs posts today, and I meant to tell you I'm sorry I dropped the ball on the 24/XF crossover story. I was planning on sending some comments and BOOM! you posted a final version. 'Twas very good, and now it's in my to-be-feedbacked folder. :)
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Oh God, I can actually *hear* this. It's a tad disturbing. I hope you didn't sprain anything in the transition, dear. *g*
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