LJ Idol 9, Week 5: Build a Better Mousetrap

[vaudy]

Marc double-checked everything in the van to make sure he hadn’t forgotten anything. Two tents, sleeping bag, air mattress, extra sleeping bag because someone always forgot theirs, duffel bag, and cooler filled with ice and pop. The empty cooler, waiting for food, sat on the driveway. Satisfied, Marc went back inside to wait

Comments

[eternal_ot]

Haha.. i enjoyed this..like a breath of fresh air...loved the word "Glamping"

[i_will_not_say]

You wrote nice character interactions! :)

[whipchick]

Great last line :) Glamping all the way!

[waveform_delta]

If that's the definition of "glamping", I've never actually been camping. :-)

[alycewilson]

Love the naturalness of your dialogue. It's hard to get it right.