Comments | variousflumps: Fic: All This Time (Alicia/Kalinda), PG

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Fic: All This Time (Alicia/Kalinda), PG

Nov 21, 2012 15:24

Title: All This Time
Author: variousflumps
Pairing: Alicia/Kalinda
Rating: PG
Summary: What if Alicia gradually discovered the full extent of the Epic Love...

Inspired by a list of all the chivalrous Epic Love-related stuff that Kalinda has done that teamsharma wrote on a sweetjamielee blog entry.

( It starts with Eli. He corners her one day and insists that she needs to persuade Kalinda to work for him again. She asks him what on earth he’s talking about, and they spar back and forth for a while, not really getting anywhere, until he blurts out that Kalinda always refuses to work for Peter. )

rating:pg, fanfiction, alicia/kalinda

Comments 19

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variousflumps November 25 2012, 00:05:46 UTC

:0)

ll10e6 November 21 2012, 19:26:21 UTC

I love your Alicia. She is smart! She can figure things out on her own! And she knows just how far to push Kalinda, and when to let up. *Sigh*

I especially like your reminder that Alicia doesn't really know how to take in Kalinda's friendship, and how that's still tinged with her suspicions that it's guilt driven. Of course, we know it's not, but it's easy to forget that Alicia maybe still wonders. And sure, it'd be a heavy load to carry, and getting rid of it would open the door to something much deeper.

You always do such a lovely job of that, putting across the depth between these two, and it's here again.

variousflumps November 25 2012, 00:10:46 UTC

Thank you! She's a smart lady, I don't think she'd need chapter and verse...a few nudges here, a few clues, and she'd figure it out. She just needs a bit of help from the all the *billions* of people who know more than she does about Kalinda's inclinations...

And yeah, I'm sure canon Alicia still has some reservations about K's motivations, which is so poignant and painful considering how K has behaved. God they're so star-crossed.

rhyfeddu November 21 2012, 19:59:51 UTC

I'm gonna stick you in a box (with air holes, don't worry) and ship you to the Kings ASAP. :)

schwarmerei1 November 22 2012, 01:44:02 UTC

*butting in* this comment cracked me up completely!

rhyfeddu November 22 2012, 02:57:26 UTC

;)

variousflumps November 25 2012, 00:13:21 UTC

I would have very few objections to this plan. They've written the love so *beautifully*, I hope they use the power of this storyline for good and not evil.

arista_artisan November 21 2012, 20:03:47 UTC

Pangs in my heart. Pangs. If only Alicia really did know how far Kalinda has gone to protect her. Excellent read.

variousflumps November 25 2012, 00:14:20 UTC

Thank you! Yeah, Lish definitely needs a wake-up call.

teamsharma November 21 2012, 21:02:05 UTC

I LOVE your story! It's like a katharsis. Can I hire you as my therapist? Thank you so much, variousflumps!

variousflumps November 25 2012, 00:16:28 UTC

Thanks! And many thanks for your excellent list of all the secret stuff that Alicia needs to find out about that inspired this thing. I am always willing to therapize these two.