Understanding (Apocripha/0, Jade/Platina, PG-15)

[vanilla_ofuda]

Title: Understanding
Series: Apocripha/0
Pairing: Jade/Platina
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2672
Warnings: shounen-ai, mentions of sex
Type: humour, romance
A/N: Finally, Jade/Platina! I've been dying to write something with them, as they are LOVE and really, Jade needs all the love he can get (and does so, as well XD That manwhore~). This is more of

Comments

[asaphira_sachi]

Teeheehee XD~ That was really cute. I think you got Jade's manipulation, Platina's temper, and their bantering quite nicely. Though, Platina seems to show his vulnerability almost too frequently o__O I kinda imagine him slightly stronger than that... Anyhow, I loved the last part when he said he permitted Jade in his bed. Just the one pretty much broke all the tension that was built up XD

[asaphira_sachi]

Primarily because fans love to pick on the uber pretty ones with long hair XDDD The "pretty" factor makes him seem vulnerable to everyone... but he actually has good defense, odd temper, and is supposed to be a very good/strong fighter. Very similar to Carrol -who also seemed to be portrayed as uber-uke o_o;; but dude, Carrol can be evil in his own way XD-. The only openings I can see in Platina are his low stamina and when someone's playing with his hair. Though I supposed it's also because of Jade too, who's the ever witty seme-like character XD