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hildigunnur December 10 2010, 23:20:43 UTC
Oh, lord. That was filthy.

Love the fact that Harry apparently is the subbiest sub there ever was and Hermione is the ultimate domme but Ron and Ginny like to switch it up. Heeh.

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vanessawolfie December 10 2010, 23:25:21 UTC
Oh yes. Filthy .. now you get why my co-writer gasped a little when she found out how old I am? She was my beta too so .... :D Yeah. She's going to post the sequel to this later tonight .. when I'm probably sleeping and in the morning I'll post the link to that. But then there is a Harry/Ron ficlet where we sort of do the same thing ... (spoiler: it involves Draco.) and there you get to know how much of a subbie sub Harry is and everything you mentioned. I can really see myself writing more in this 'verse. :D

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bleedforyou1 December 11 2010, 09:43:22 UTC
Lol awesome. My part is now posted :D
Sooo I know you love me, but you put me as the "author" of this story not the "beta" heehee.

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brinimc December 30 2010, 21:09:31 UTC
O.o
This is only the second femmslash I've ever read. :)

When the saw the pairings, I was like, "No.. no.. no, nononono, I can't read this!" Oh em gee, and if I heard that they all rotate their Dom's and share knowingly, I might not have. But...

IT WAS SO GOOD!

I guess there is something to be said for trying new things. I was totally reading through my hands at the part where they all share and how Ron and Ginny both have sex with Harry but once I got pass all that, it became... Hot. XD

Oh my, I LOVE (lovelovelove) that Hermione is a dirty!talking dominatrix. She has totally redeemed herself in my mind. But she was Goooood! Heh, "dirty little whore." :)

Hahahahahahahahaha! LOVE Luna! Oh my god, love that she walked in. That was perfect, perfect, perfect. This was funny and sexy at the same time. Nice job!

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vanessawolfie December 31 2010, 00:24:06 UTC
Yeah .... These are all the stories I've written so that makes this .... my first femmslash fic? (I have also written a Twilight fic actually but that had only hetero. :D)

I am proud of the dirty talking.. I think it all comes from the very many BDSM fics I've read. It's just .... natural in that environment.

Luna was the inspiration to this whole story... It was the prompt lovely really but we all know that when it comes down to HP then "lovely" just screams LUNA. You read bleedforyou1's stories too ?? Because she makes the real SEX scenes... :D hhihi

Thank you for commenting and all your compliments... :D

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brinimc December 31 2010, 00:30:00 UTC
Who is the pairing in the Twilight one?

Yeah, I made sure to read the sequels, cause the story was good and because I saw she wrote them.

Dirty talking is a win! :D

Your welcome! It was a joy to read your stories. :)

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vanessawolfie December 31 2010, 00:32:42 UTC
Nessie/Jacob... and a slight Edward/Bella and mentions of other canon pairings. :D Why ?

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