Second Chances (Chapter 28b)

Nov 24, 2011 03:01

Title: Second Chances
Author: VampireMadonna
Pairing: Main: YunJae; Secondary: JaeMin, HoMin
Rating: PG-13
Length: Chaptered
Summary: After Changmin's death, how are Jae and Yunho going to cope with their grief and their increasing attraction to each other?
A/N: This part is a little complicated. It's set to BGM to set the atmosphere for the scene ( Read more... )

charater death, homin, yunho, jaejoong, friendship, pg, second chances, chaptered, yunjae, romance, jaemin

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helcha72 November 26 2011, 00:19:56 UTC
Yunho and Jae are so well written they feel like real people I know. Their pain is so palpable I want to yell stop! stop torturing yourself and do something! But what? Just like in real life there isn't an easy answer. After getting lost in this world you've created for almost a year, I only hope there is a happy ending to make all our tears just a memory.

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asuka2507 November 26 2011, 17:27:25 UTC
i nearly miss ur updates~~~ because i scroll my f-list so fast... but here i am reading n crying :S im guessing yun finally remembered abt jae from long tym ago based on the pic at the attic *imightbewrong* i forgot hyunjong role in this fic lol... yun's a bit slow but he's going there... i truely wish kai can be with jae... he's so kind n all... but jae loved yun for a very long tym for him to actually stop his feelings~ cant wait for yunjae to be together... its coming to an end n i cant believe how long ive followed this fic... one of the most memorable fic ive ever read~ hope to read more of ur creation in the future... till the next final big chapter... i have big expectation for the final chap n do hope i dont missed it again like i did for this chapter XDDD

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ene_de_nena November 27 2011, 04:03:38 UTC
And what would have happen if Yunho hadn't ever found that box...or that picture in concrete? would he have denied himself of Jaejoong's love forever?
Sometimes love has its twisted, very perverted ways too...but these two are destined to be together after having their second chance.

Perfect fic is perfect. I'm sad it is ending soon. Can't believe it's been a whole year already!

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janekaulitz November 28 2011, 23:05:18 UTC
Right now, I understand most of the things that have happened up until now. I mean, I think I have overreacted to the way Yunho sent Jae off.

I've had a deep and thorough conversation about all of this with a friend of mine and I got to the conclusion that, even though Yunho was unfair to Jae in the way he made Jae leave, it was understandable.

I think Yunho thought he was being unfair not only to Min's memory, but also to Jae, because he kind of thought he was just using Jae to forget his own grief and that made him think he was betraying his dead husband, which is kind of ridiculous, but understandable.

Then, Jae had found Kai, but, in my opinion it was because Jae had to experience how Yunho felt towards him and Min and that he kinda had to know that all Yunho did was out of confusion and that he was STILL grieving over Min. You can tell me if it is or it is not, I don't mind XD.

I just hope that things can get fixed between them and that they can get their HEA.

Keep up the great job, darling <3 I'll be impatiently waiting for ( ... )

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vampiremadonna November 28 2011, 23:24:07 UTC
You are right about everything except Jae and Kai. The reason I threw that in was, well, realistically, Jae is a very attractive guy so it'd make sense that he met someone when he came back and in a previous chapter I established a history of Kitty setting him up on dates for that very reason. Kai gave him the chance to experience actually being with someone he could like, who wasn't Yunho, since he said he never really met anyone that he truly connected with. In the end, naturally, his love for Yunho could not be denied.

He knows why Yunho did what he did and he doesn't blame him. He'd expected it (for Yunho to push him away) but he'd thought it would've come sooner. When the months kept going by and they only grew closer, he started to believe that MAYBE Yunho was moving on and dealing with Min's loss better than he'd hoped. In the end, it didn't turn out to be that easy. But he knows that Yunho has feelings for him, that's the reason he left quietly instead of talking him out of it like he had before, even though it hurt like hell

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janekaulitz November 29 2011, 05:22:41 UTC
Well, damn. I guess, I just overthought things. But at least Jae forgot his own pain for a while (?). Anyways, I'm really glad he'd met Kai throughout all the shit he'd been put through and knowing that he understands why Yunho did what he did just relieves me to no end, despite the fact that I feel really bad for him, because - in my opinion - it was kind of unfair.

But I won't blame it all on Yunho now. He has his own shit to deal with too.

And hell... Jae has gone through a lot too on his own. I mean, at least, Yunho kind of had Jae to rely on while he was grieving, Jae had no one, he dealt with all of this by himself. Anyways, as I already said like a thousand times, I won't blame Yunho.

I absolutely love the way you write. Is so RARE to find fanfiction as well written as yours. I barely caught any mistakes and the way you write it is just... mesmerizing.

I will be so sad when this story comes to its ending...

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ellen611 December 6 2011, 15:46:44 UTC
just finished chapter 24 to 28.
Wooow....I am very blur from all the emotions going through my very own being.
Love your fic very much and hope that it will be a happy ending.
Thanks.

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