Forbidden: Part 7

May 05, 2011 02:15

Title: Forbidden
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG-13
Length: Part 7/? (It's a LONG short story)
Summary: Jae is concerned about the attention his sister is receiving from a dangerous man but he isn't in any position to take care of it himself so he turns to the king. However, the King, Jung Yunho, presents unforeseen ( Read more... )

yunho, jaejoong, pg-13, historical, chaptered, yunjae, forbidden, romance

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yunho1205 May 5 2011, 06:15:51 UTC
SPOTTTTTT!!!

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rainycakes May 5 2011, 07:07:05 UTC
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! OMO OMO OMO!!!!

What else does Jae possibly have to do to get me to love him more than I already do??! *swoons* He is so...SO...*sigh* Ugh, and I'd give anything to see him all dressed up like that~ Or in his undergarments~ Or naked~ Yes, I think I'll take naked!! LOL~

Aigoo~ The boinking of the Queen...it has to be done! It has to! I know this! But that doesn't make me like it any more than I already don't! O.o If that made any kind of sense...lol OMG~ Jae! So understanding~ And he's still so new to it all! So confused~ And innocent~ Waaaaahhhh!!!!! Oh but I doubt he seems very innocent when he's writhing under Yunho~ kekeke! Omg I seriously have a one-track mind. *shakes head*

I wonder if Yunho will be able to do his duty. hehehe~

"He flipped her onto her stomach and kicked her legs apart, spreading her thighs.

As he pushed his pants down to his knees, he leaned forward and whispered in her ear,

“I won’t be gentle.”RAWR!! Was that supposed to scare her or turn her off, Yunho? Cuz it ( ... )

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yozora_yume May 5 2011, 07:46:49 UTC
lmao pervert no. 2? XD

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yunho1205 May 5 2011, 08:03:48 UTC
LOL!!! Oh yes!! I'm lucky Pervert #1!!! LOL!! vampiremadonna calls us the pervert twins, and since I'm older by about 6-7 minutes years, I'm #1!! :))))

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yozora_yume May 5 2011, 07:46:03 UTC
Oh gosh, now I see traces of Frozen Flower in this fic. Before I was wondering where the details of the movie would come in but now I can see them clearly and I'm quite glad you didn't follow the exact storyline, I don't really like the idea of Jae sleeping with the queen if ever ^^;;

anyway I'm in love with this chap, it portrayed so much emotions! Jaejoong's naivety and his own doubts and Yunho's predicaments, I can totally feel them in here ^^

Thank you for sharing!! Hope to see more soon!!!:D

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yunho1205 May 5 2011, 07:59:08 UTC
HOLY. FUCK. Wow!! I mean, just . . . wow!!

My heart hurts for all three of them. They're all victims of the world and time they live in. UGH!! Duty and honor and obligations!! It sucks!! I'm soooooo glad I wasn't born in those times!!

Ok, so at first a few chaps ago, yes I'll admit it, I wasn't too crazy about the Queen. *sigh* But that was only because she drugged my poor Jae. Well, then you kept telling me to trust you, and yes of course I do, but now I just feel sorry for her too. :(((

But tbh, I really am starting to admire her character. The way she dealt with that Lord Yoo guy and especially the way she approached Jae about the whole thing. I was holding my breath, reading each word out loud it's my thing when a fic gets intense, wondering how Jae was going to take everything, and how the hell she was gonna get him outta that room, and how you managed to make me love Jae's character even more for his sacrifice is beyond me!! LOL!! And even the way The Queen reasoned with Yun about it, very rationally and ( ... )

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riseofnoona May 5 2011, 10:11:26 UTC
it's when you see those kind of relatiochip that you realise mpreg would have make things so much easier...or not XD

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yunho1205 May 5 2011, 13:32:56 UTC
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Silly!!

I for one, can't stand being a woman!! Hehehehe!! If my ex-husband could have had my daughters instead of me, my boobs would still be where they were meant to be and life would be great!! LOL!! ♥♥♥

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riseofnoona May 5 2011, 14:25:27 UTC
Yeah, and no nausea, swollen ankles and ugly strech marks. No really, Mother Nature is a myth ! It's Father Nature, and he's a fucking sexist >_

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winter_subaki May 5 2011, 08:27:02 UTC
Herm..this getting intense.what will happen to them next? to jae n yunho? actually, i felt sorry to the queen also. But..I don't know..

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riseofnoona May 5 2011, 10:10:13 UTC
The idea of yunho with a woman, as beautiful as she might be, is...unconfortable XD But even if I don't really like the queen, i pity her...Why doesn't she go and make a child with a lover and then ask yunho to take the child as his ? >_< Would be sooooo much easier that way (everybody find a lover, quick !)

I feared that the emissary was the Chief yunho had a relationship with back then, but now I can breathe XD

THANK YOU FOR THE UP, IT WAS NEEDED o/

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