Forbidden: Part 7

[vampiremadonna]

Title: Forbidden
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG-13
Length: Part 7/? (It's a LONG short story)
Summary: Jae is concerned about the attention his sister is receiving from a dangerous man but he isn't in any position to take care of it himself so he turns to the king. However, the King, Jung Yunho, presents unforeseen

Comments

[munchycocoa]

nooooo~~~ straight sex =X but i'm glad the queen had come to accept the fact that jae owns yun's heart. although i still quite dont like her when recalling her previous attempt to make jae miserable using the nasty potion.

i hope yunho would understand jae's decision and didnt get mad to him or doubting that jae truly cares for him. anyway, looks like jae still needs to sort out his feelings and come to realize that he is indeed in love with the king!

[yunho_ism]

IT TOOK ME 2 HOURS TO FINISH READING THIS CHAP.
2 LOOOONG HOUUUUUURS!!! CAUSE I KEEP GETTING NERVOUS OVER THE NEXT LINE.
AND NOW I'M ON CAPSLOCK ABUSE CAUSE MY HEART IS STILL POUNDING.
SHOULD I PITY THE QUEEN? YEAH? NOPE?
SHE HAS A POINT ABOUT NEEDING AN HEIR BUT DAMN I AM SCARED OF HER.
SHE'S SO COLD AND FREAKY AND MANIPULATIVE AND UGH... /SHIVERS
AND NOW SHE'LL FINALLY HAVE YUNHO IN BED AGAIN.
POOR JAE. WELL NO ONE'S HAPPY WITH THEIR CURRENT SITUATIONS.
WILL YOU WRITE YUN AND THE QUEENS'S LOVE SCENE IN DETAIL? @___@
THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE. AND REALLY... CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE.<333

[vampiremadonna]

Lol. I was wondering how come I hadn't heard from you yet. Two hours? Ouch... >_>

YES, you should pity the Queen. I told you guys in the beginning not to hate her. I tried to make her very human here. She's not being manipulative like everyone seems to think, she's doing what she needs to do for EVERYONE involved.
To me, her plight is the worst. She doesn't have anyone to lean on; at least Yun has Jae to get him through everything... hopefully

[yunho_ism]

ahuh. i didn't want to miss out on a single detail. lol.
well she's the one getting in yunjae's way so it's quite difficult not to hate her. (>.<)
and i think she did mess with jae's head with her words on why he really needs to leave the room (though most of what she said is true).
but i do agree that there is the side wherein she's the one suffering the most.
you're right about her being truly alone and how begging for yunho's touch is quite humiliating.
lol. i guess i got all paranoid with the kingxqueen scene.
i just wanted to make sure if i needed to prepare my poor heart for some het smut. XD
thank goodness the scene ends there. /showers you with kisses <333

[hitomi2oo7]

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo... ~faints~
life is unfair dammit!!! *goes to cry in the corner*

[yunjaefor]

Poor Yunho and Queen =( and I hope Jaejoong will love Yunho as much as king love him... because now it seems that he uses the king only as to make himself feel good (((

[zoevo]

Another awesome fic from you!!! I'm amazed at how perfectly you get all the emotions through and the way you build your characters.
I love the Queen here. She is so real and unfortunate that you can't help but feel so much sympathy for.
As much as I hate the idea, I hope that Jae will have the chance to experience with a woman or see Yun being with the Queen so that he can find the answers to his sexual orientation/feelings.

btw, I actually like your fic more the the movie 'cause I really don't like the Chief and the Queen in there.