Comments | vampirehydeftw: 12 Days of Christmas

vampirehydeftw

12 Days of Christmas

Dec 28, 2014 00:00

The Fourth Day of Christmas....

....Four Colly Birds
Title: Broken Wings
Rating: 18
Band: X Japan
Pairing: Heath X Toshi
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rating: 18, heath x toshi, project: 12 days of christmas, x japan, broken wings

Comments 10

morbidprose December 28 2014, 01:03:28 UTC

Brilliant darling! Its better than I thought it was going to be! You have truly outdone your brilliant self! Its hot yummy and zomg squeeeeeee! I about died when you brought that lamp into the mix! you completely blew my yaoi loving mind!

leifang666 December 28 2014, 10:15:45 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it XD I haven't been writing much you can enjoy recently have I? It's the Gackt advent stealing most of my time now but in the new year i'll give some more love to X.

Mana X Kaya coming on the 6th Day.

morbidprose December 28 2014, 13:58:29 UTC

XD yeah but there hasn't been much good writing other than yours on here lately anyway. But yay manaxkaya! I love that pairing! Haven't read that one in forever cause hardly anyone writes it

leifang666 December 28 2014, 14:14:27 UTC

all the fics are Gazette or diru lately. Eadwine63 writes the odd Gackt X Hyde and i'm hear like "I write what I want, deal with it." XD

color_me_blue3 December 28 2014, 13:50:24 UTC

Nice one :) I love this pairing, yet I've always seen Toshi to be too much of a Seme to be the Uke, but it was pleasant to read anyways. I was wondering how the sex toy was the whole time until I saw it. But what I imagined wasn't that far from it.

leifang666 December 28 2014, 13:52:49 UTC

Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

eadwine63 December 30 2014, 15:33:50 UTC

I'm not sure if I can picture this pairing well... but I love Heath so it's fine, lol.

also, the Love the Bird lamp is actually a pretty damn awesome lamp isn't it? I don't really like the moment it shines red, because then it's like ... the bottom half only but well whatever I didn't come here to talk about sex toys.

I liked this. I don't really know what to say so maybe I did sort of come to talk about sex toys?
no seriously though, it was a great story. A bit of background, a bit of sex, a bit of romance even though you explained how romance wasn't his strong suit anyway. Kind of. *chuckles*

enough said, I'm going to read more.

vampirehydeftw December 30 2014, 16:22:48 UTC

The lamp is an awesome idea, but so ugly!

And yes, you just want to talk about sex toys. ;p

eadwine63 December 30 2014, 18:59:08 UTC

oh come on it's not even that ugly! have you seen the dildo aquarium?

leifang666 December 30 2014, 19:47:05 UTC

Nope. Not seen that one.