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[valour]

Okay, so six pages is a little longer than a drabble...

Title: Waiting to Build
Disclaimer: I don't know these people and I certainly don't know about their sex lives. This would be fiction.
Pairing: Chris/Justin/Britney
Rating: PG-13
Notes: Thanks to k_leale for the beta. All for synecdochic who requested Britney/Justin/Chris. Quote: "Dear brothers and sisters,

Comments

[alwayseven]

This was perfect. Absolutely, and completely. I've always loved the potential dynamic between the three of them and I completely love the way you wrote them here. Achy but beautiful.

My favorite part: This isn't going to end in sex, Justin doesn’t think, because they've been down this road before and it was really fucking gorgeous right up until they went over the cliff.

Justin doesn't remember the street signs half as well as he remembers the fall.

Thank you so much for this.

[valour]

oh thank you! I've always found the three of them so interesting. I've written about them before and somehow it always comes back to the idea of the break up. Maybe one of these days I'll tackle the actual relationship. ;) Thank you so much for the feedback.

[frausorge]

What a lovely story! I like this view of Britney and Justin post-breakup without undercutting the relationship, and the moment where Britney finds Justin while he's looking for Chris is very deftly set up.

[valour]

Thank you very much. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. :)

[withdiamonds]

I like this so much. It seems very possible, and it's low-key but sharp. I love Lance here, and Joey. I love how Justin feels about it all, and that he won't blame youth because that would make Chris the bad guy. Lovely.

[valour]

Thank you! I really liked having Lance and Joey in this too. I'm just sad I could find a way of mentioning JC, not actually showing him. Thanks so much for the feedback. It's very much appreciated.

[joyfulseeker]

I liked this. I liked the complicated history that you gave the characters that lets me build my own view of the future for them in my head. I really like this Justin, and loved the interactions with Joey, Lance, and phantom JC.

[valour]

I'm so glad that the story worked for you (and that it let you imagine a future for them.) And I am a little sorry that it was only phantom JC but I was glad to be ale to include them all at least by mention. :) Thanks so much for the feedback!

[synecdochic]

My God, there are so many beautiful lines in here, but most of all, I love the last one. Can I just say how happy I am that it turned out to be not-a-ficlet? :) The undercurrent of hope, the scars faced plainly but not flaunted -- yeah. It's beautiful.

[valour]

Oh I am *so* glad that you liked it! (I was hoping that I'd gotten the right *tone* for what you wanted.) And beautiful lines? Thank you. *beams*