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valerienne

Winter in the Sky

Apr 19, 2005 19:02

Title: Winter in the Sky
Author: valerienne
Rating: PG
Pairing: BB/DM
Disclaimer: Not real. Pretty, but not real.
Warnings: A bit angsty. Somewhat purple.
Notes: This was written for light_the_sky76 just because she is such a sweetie! I don't think it's entirely what she imagined she would get, when she gave me the bunny, but I hope she likes it anyway :)

( The sky is blue, endlessly, infinitely blue, like the water in the glass after a child has swirled its brush )

Comments 18

unstealthy April 19 2005, 18:33:21 UTC

Gorgeous. Just gorgeous. mmmmmm.

valerienne April 19 2005, 22:41:55 UTC

I've been feeling very prosaic and frumpy in a fic sense lately, so this was my attempt to be a bit lyrical for a change. Possibly a *tad* over the top, but I enjoyed writing it, so what the hell :)

light_the_sky76 April 19 2005, 19:41:43 UTC

*high pitched squeaky noise*

That was for me? It was beautiful

Thank you

valerienne April 19 2005, 22:47:46 UTC

Glad you like! Well, I did say I'd have a go, hon. I suspect it's not really what you meant by a freckle counting fic, but it's the bunny that came and bit :) (If I've confused you, by the way, we had the conversation when I was logged in as nickeyb, if that helps)

hyacinth_sky747 April 20 2005, 01:22:06 UTC

That was lovely, just breath-taking.

slippery as memory

summer storms that tickle in the nose, that tingle under the tongue

Little gems of phrases trickle throughout this story. I love it.

valerienne April 20 2005, 08:39:15 UTC

Glad the purpleness of my prose didn't put everyone off :) Thank you very much.

hystericblue42 April 20 2005, 04:34:47 UTC

This is beautiful!

valerienne April 20 2005, 08:42:16 UTC

Much appreciated. *hugs*

darkerbreed April 20 2005, 06:35:46 UTC

Beautiful.

valerienne April 20 2005, 08:43:05 UTC

Thanks!