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vail_kagami

DW/TW Drabble

Jul 01, 2009 01:29

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medium: story, doctor who era: tenth doctor, fandom: doctor who, medium: drabble, fandom: torchwood

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rose_cat July 1 2009, 06:39:37 UTC

Nice! And no universal translator necessary :D I love this bit:

...he sets the glass upside-down right onto the guy’s crotch: I don’t like being ignored. And when I like something I take it.

(One question: John takes the drink from his fingers and drowns it. Was that supposed to be "drains," or something?)

No fail here :) God, I hate oral exams. You are so brave!

vail_kagami July 1 2009, 11:23:45 UTC

It's not like I'd have any choice concerning the orals. At least one is over. The next one will be worse because I hate the toppic, but on the other hand I'm not really concerned about my marks there as long as I pass.

Oh, yes. I corrected that. And fixed the format.

I'll write the drabble for you tonight, if I find the time.

rose_cat July 2 2009, 09:48:26 UTC

Take your time :) (And I won't nag you about Versus Time. No, I did not just say that :) )

vail_kagami July 2 2009, 19:48:04 UTC

You can nag all you want. It doesn't have any effect at the moment. It's one of those times.

But I'll definitely do your drabble tonight. Didn't get around to it yesterday, since learning took until 3 AM.

anonymous July 1 2009, 15:42:50 UTC

'“Okay,” he finally says in perfect English. “But I top.”'

Nice. And a bit cheeky! I'm suffering in the British heatwave while trying to write another chapter for work. Not fun. But this was just the bite sized chunk of light reading that I needed to lift my spirits! Good luck with the exams and associated revision. How on earth do you sit an oral in 'General Lingustics'? Sounds nasty!

Arithon

vail_kagami July 1 2009, 16:10:12 UTC

Thank you! You know, as someone who stumped me, you are free to request a drabble as well!

anonymous July 1 2009, 15:47:11 UTC

Oh, one small thing (hope you will forgive me) - shouldn't it be "amuse HIM greatly" rather than "amuse HIS greatly" on the penultimate line?

anonymous July 1 2009, 15:47:45 UTC

From Arithon!

vail_kagami July 1 2009, 16:10:42 UTC

Oh, right. Thanks!

shinodabear July 1 2009, 18:12:11 UTC

Oh, I like this. Quite the dangerous pair. Love the Master's attitude. :)

vail_kagami July 2 2009, 19:45:41 UTC

The Master's attitude is an indepandant character.
Thanks for reading! I really need to catch up wit your stuff, but at the moment there is hardly time for me to breathe.

shinodabear July 2 2009, 20:46:34 UTC

I know the feeling. RL is a pain sometimes. :)

sassy_lion July 2 2009, 02:17:23 UTC

Absolutely brilliant. I love it. :D

vail_kagami July 2 2009, 19:46:24 UTC

Thanks! Gald you like it.